Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语言不够自然，有重复和语法错误，且内容较为冗长。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并注意语法准确。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love singing because it makes me feel happy and energetic. When I hear my favorite songs, I can't help but sing along and enjoy the music.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且有语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子补充细节，避免口头语和断句不清。

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I'm not a professional. However, when I was young, I enjoyed singing karaoke with my friends all night, which was very fun.

Gợi ý: 回答表达有些重复且不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子表达观点，避免重复，并适当使用连接词使内容更自然。

Ví dụ: I don't usually sing for a specific person. Sometimes I sing alone because I enjoy the melody. However, I love singing with my daughters because it's a fun bonding activity.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，且内容重复。建议用清晰的句子表达观点，避免语法错误，并用具体例子支持观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. Different songs with various melodies can change our mood; some make us feel calm, while others make us feel joyful.

× Everybody loves singing because when you hear your favorite song and you hear the the music, you just wanna move and also you of course you wanna sing and you wanna sing with them and you also can practice your.

✓ Everybody loves singing because when you hear your favorite song and you hear the music, you just wanna move and also, of course, you wanna sing and you wanna sing with it and you can also practice your singing.

这里“them”指代的是“music”，而“music”是不可数名词，不能用复数代词“them”，应改为“it”。另外，句子末尾“practice your”不完整，应补充为“practice your singing”。

× No, never because I'm not a professional, uh, but when I was young, uh, I love to hang out with my friends and, and uh, we like to stay all night to karaoke and we can sing all night.

✓ No, never because I'm not a professional, uh, but when I was young, uh, I loved to hang out with my friends and, and uh, we liked to stay all night to karaoke and we could sing all night.

描述过去的动作时，动词应使用过去时态。这里“love”和“like”应改为“loved”和“liked”，表示过去的习惯或行为。

× we like to stay all night to karaoke and we can sing all night.

✓ we liked to stay up all night singing karaoke and we could sing all night.

“stay all night to karaoke”中“to karaoke”用法不当，正确表达应为“stay up all night singing karaoke”，表示整晚唱卡拉OK。

× Not particularly one. I sometimes I just sing by myself and because I hear the melody and I I just want to sing it.

✓ Not particularly one. Sometimes I just sing by myself because I hear the melody and I just want to sing it.

句子中“I sometimes I”重复，应去掉一个“I”，使句子更通顺。

× I don't really want to sing for someone, but I love to sing with someone like my daughters.

✓ I don't really want to sing for someone, but I love to sing with someone like my daughter.

“daughters”是复数，前面用“someone”指单数，前后不一致，应改为单数“daughter”。

× Yes, definitely every song every because their melody is slow, is quick, you can change your mood and it can make you sad.

✓ Yes, definitely every song, because their melodies can be slow or quick, you can change your mood and it can make you sad.

“every song every because their melody is slow, is quick”结构混乱，应调整为“every song, because their melodies can be slow or quick”，使句子更通顺且语法正确。

× It can also make you happiness and so yes, I think seeing can bring happiness and.

✓ It can also make you happy, so yes, I think singing can bring happiness.

“make you happiness”错误，正确表达应为“make you happy”，因为“happy”是形容词，修饰人；“happiness”是名词，不能直接用作宾语。