Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
No, I don't like singing because I'm not good at singing and singing in front of others always makes me shy, so I prefer listen to music rather than singing.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
No, haven't learned how to sing because I found myself not very good at it. I usually prefer listening to music rather than singing as I enjoy appreciating different styles and melodies more.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I would like to sing for someone special to me, such as a close friend or family members because I enjoy sharing romantic and intimate songs with them. Singing for someone who I cared about makes the experience more personal and meaningful.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do believe seeing can bring happiness to people because they allow us to express our emotion freely. For example, when people sing their favorite song, they can feel more relaxed and joyful. Sing together with others can also create a sense of connection and shared happiness.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且直接,但存在语法错误(如“prefer listen”应为“prefer listening”),且句子较长,建议简化句子结构,避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: No, I don't like singing because I'm not good at it and feel shy singing in front of others. Therefore, I prefer listening to music instead.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容清晰,但语法上应使用完整句子(如“I haven't learned”),并注意时态一致。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I don't think I'm very good at it. Moreover, I usually prefer listening to music since I enjoy appreciating different styles and melodies.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答结构合理,表达清晰。建议注意时态一致(“who I cared about”应为“who I care about”),并适当使用连接词增强连贯性。
Ví dụ: I would like to sing for someone special to me, such as a close friend or family member, because I enjoy sharing romantic and intimate songs with them. Singing for someone I care about makes the experience more personal and meaningful.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在拼写错误(“seeing”应为“singing”),且部分句子结构不完整(如“Sing together with others”应为“Singing together with others”)。建议注意拼写和语法,使用完整句子和连接词。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows us to express our emotions freely. For example, when people sing their favorite songs, they feel more relaxed and joyful. Additionally, singing together with others creates a sense of connection and shared happiness.
× No, I don't like singing because I'm not good at singing and singing in front of others always makes me shy, so I prefer listen to music rather than singing.
✓ No, I don't like singing because I'm not good at singing and singing in front of others always makes me shy, so I prefer listening to music rather than singing.
动词prefer后面应该接动名词形式listening,而不是动词原形listen。
× No, haven't learned how to sing because I found myself not very good at it.
✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing because I found myself not very good at it.
句子缺少主语I,导致句子不完整。
× I usually prefer listening to music rather than singing as I enjoy appreciating different styles and melodies more.
✓ I usually prefer listening to music rather than singing as I enjoy appreciating different styles and melodies more.
此句无语法错误,符合动词+动名词结构。
× Singing for someone who I cared about makes the experience more personal and meaningful.
✓ Singing for someone who I care about makes the experience more personal and meaningful.
此处应使用一般现在时care,表示现在的状态,而不是过去时cared。
× Singing for someone who I cared about makes the experience more personal and meaningful.
✓ Singing for someone whom I care about makes the experience more personal and meaningful.
关系代词作宾语时应使用whom而非who。
× Yes, I do believe seeing can bring happiness to people because they allow us to express our emotion freely.
✓ Yes, I do believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows us to express our emotions freely.
原句中seeing应为singing,且主语singing为单数,谓语动词应使用单数形式allows,emotion应为复数emotions。
× Sing together with others can also create a sense of connection and shared happiness.
✓ Singing together with others can also create a sense of connection and shared happiness.
动词作主语时应使用动名词形式singing,而非动词原形sing。