Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中有很多犹豫词（如umm, uh），影响了表达的流畅性。建议减少填充词，使用更自然简洁的句子直接表达观点，并且注意语法和句子结构的完整性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because I started learning it when I was a child, and I feel confident in my singing ability.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和不连贯的表达，且有较多填充词。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned to sing when I was a child. Singing helps me relax and express my emotions, which is why I love it so much.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且有趣，但语法和表达有待改进。建议注意冠词和动词形式的正确使用，同时保持句子简洁自然。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my cat, Nini, who is an Abyssinian. She always makes me feel better, so singing to her is very special to me.

Gợi ý: 回答中有用词不当和语法错误，如“combined”应为“combines”，“pathetics”用词不准确。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Singing combines music and lyrics, expressing rich emotions, which can bring happiness to people.

× She's name is Nini and she's a Abyssinian cat.

✓ Her name is Nini and she's an Abyssinian cat.

这里's是she is的缩写，不能用来表示所有格。应该用所有格代词her来表示“她的名字”。另外，a后面接以元音音素开头的单词Abyssinian，应使用an。

× The reason I want to sing to for her is because she always makes me feel better so that's why I love it.

✓ The reason I want to sing to her is because she always makes me feel better, so that's why I love it.

动词短语是sing to sb.，不需要加for。这里多余的for是错误的介词使用，应删除。

× Singing is a form that combined literature and music, which is contained rich emotions and sometimes there are really deep pathetics.

✓ Singing is a form that combines literature and music, which contains rich emotions and sometimes really deep pathos.

主语是单数形式，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式combines和contains。pathetics用法错误，正确词为pathos，表示情感感染力。