Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer shows enthusiasm, but there are some language inaccuracies and unclear expressions. Try to use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'convey' instead of 'convince', 'singing' instead of 'seeing') and avoid repetition. Also, keep your answer concise and clear within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it allows me to express my emotions and connect with others. Singing also helps me relax, especially when I'm feeling stressed or upset. Overall, it's a wonderful way to improve my mood and share happiness.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains several grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct verb tenses and vocabulary (e.g., 'singing' instead of 'seeing', 'human nature' instead of 'humanities'). Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail.

Ví dụ: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. However, I believe singing is a natural ability that most people are born with, so it doesn't always require training.

Gợi ý: Your answer is quite unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct sentence structures. Specify who you want to sing for with clear reasons, and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for people all around the world, especially those who are poor and struggling to support themselves. Also, I want to sing for hardworking individuals who contribute to society, as everyone deserves to be appreciated through music.

Gợi ý: Your answer conveys the main idea but has vocabulary mistakes ('singing' instead of 'seeing', 'convey' instead of 'convene') and some awkward phrasing. Use precise vocabulary and link your ideas smoothly to improve clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express joy and share positive feelings with others. It is a fun and enjoyable form of entertainment that can lift everyone's spirits.

× I think songs are a great way for us to convince our feelings, our emotions to others.

✓ I think songs are a great way for us to convey our feelings, our emotions to others.

The verb 'convince' is incorrectly used here; the correct verb is 'convey' when talking about expressing or communicating feelings. 'Convince' means to persuade someone, which is not the intended meaning.

× And the great seeing itself is a great way to relax.

✓ And singing itself is a great way to relax.

The word 'seeing' is a typo or incorrect form; the correct gerund form related to the context is 'singing'. This corrects the meaning and fits the context of the conversation.

× Whether we are overwhelmed by some bad emotions, we can sing.

✓ Whether we are overwhelmed by some bad emotions, we can sing.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Unfortunately I didn't learn how to sing before, but I think seeing itself is kind of natural of humanities.

✓ Unfortunately, I haven't learned how to sing before, but I think singing itself is kind of natural to humans.

The past simple 'didn't learn' is less appropriate here; present perfect 'haven't learned' is better to express experience up to now. Also, 'seeing' should be 'singing'. 'Natural of humanities' is incorrect; it should be 'natural to humans'.

× Unfortunately I didn't learn how to sing before, but I think seeing itself is kind of natural of humanities.

✓ Unfortunately, I haven't learned how to sing before, but I think singing itself is kind of natural to humans.

As above, 'seeing' is incorrect; 'singing' is the correct gerund form. Also, 'natural of humanities' is incorrect; 'natural to humans' is the correct phrase.

× You don't need to learn it, you can just can do it as you're born.

✓ You don't need to learn it; you can just do it as you're born.

The phrase 'can just can do it' contains a redundant modal verb 'can'. Only one 'can' is needed. Also, a semicolon or period is better than a comma to separate independent clauses.

× There's a lot of people I'd like to sing for for the people on the spreading of the world.

✓ There are a lot of people I'd like to sing for, for the people around the world.

'There's' is singular; it should be 'There are' for plural 'people'. 'On the spreading of the world' is incorrect; 'around the world' is the correct phrase.

× For the people is so poor to support their lives.

✓ For the people who are so poor to support their lives.

The sentence lacks a relative pronoun and verb agreement. 'People is' is incorrect; it should be 'people who are'. This corrects subject-verb agreement and sentence structure.

× For the people work hard to make our society evaluate every people deserve a song for them.

✓ For the people who work hard to make our society better; everyone deserves a song.

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Added 'who' for relative clause, corrected verb agreement, and rephrased for clarity. 'Evaluate every people' is incorrect; likely intended 'improve society' or similar. 'Every people' should be 'everyone'.

× Of course, seeing itself is a happy thing for people to do.

✓ Of course, singing itself is a happy thing for people to do.

'Seeing' is incorrect; 'singing' is the correct gerund form in this context.

× Also, it can convene our happiness to others, which brings fun to the other people.

✓ Also, it can convey our happiness to others, which brings joy to other people.

'Convene' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'convey' meaning to communicate. 'Brings fun' is awkward; 'brings joy' or 'makes others happy' is better.