Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like singing because when I was a child my parents always taught me some interesting things. He taught me how to sing in.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
No, when I was a child my parents taught me singing with a freestyle. I never learned how to sing. I always think with my with myself feeling.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I want to sing for my grandpa because he loves listen to beautiful songs.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think seeing can bring happiness to people. When people are saying they often feel happy and relaxed they they set the happiness. I think thing can bring happiness.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且表达不完整,句子结构混乱,缺少清晰的主题句和具体细节。建议简洁明了地表达喜欢唱歌的原因,并补充具体细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. When I was a child, my parents often encouraged me to sing, which made me enjoy it even more.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,表达含糊且有语法错误。建议直接回答问题,并用连贯的句子说明没有正式学习唱歌的原因。
Ví dụ: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. My parents encouraged me to sing freely based on my feelings rather than following strict rules.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简洁,但有语法错误和表达不够自然。建议使用正确的语法并丰富细节,使回答更完整。
Ví dụ: I want to sing for my grandpa because he enjoys listening to beautiful songs. Singing for him would make him happy and strengthen our bond.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在多处语法和拼写错误,表达不清晰。建议用简洁明了的句子表达观点,并提供具体原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and express their emotions, which improves their mood.
× He taught me how to sing in.
✓ They taught me how to sing.
句中主语是复数的父母(parents),应使用复数动词形式。原句中使用了单数代词He,导致主谓不一致。建议将He改为They以保持主谓一致。
× I always think with my with myself feeling.
✓ I always thought with my own feelings.
句子描述的是过去的情况,动词应使用过去时态。原句中使用了现在时态think,应改为过去时态thought。此外,表达“with my with myself feeling”不通顺,建议改为“with my own feelings”。
× my grandpa because he loves listen to beautiful songs.
✓ my grandpa because he loves listening to beautiful songs.
动词love后应接动名词形式listening,而不是动词原形listen。原句中缺少动名词形式,导致语法错误。
× Yes, I think seeing can bring happiness to people.
✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people.
单词seeing在此处用错,应为singing,表示“唱歌”。这是词汇选择错误,属于代词/词语使用错误。
× When people are saying they often feel happy and relaxed they they set the happiness.
✓ When people are singing, they often feel happy and relaxed; they feel happiness.
原句结构混乱,重复使用了they,且表达不清晰。应调整句子结构,明确主语和谓语,使句意通顺。
× I think thing can bring happiness.
✓ I think singing can bring happiness.
单词thing用错,应为singing,表示“唱歌”。这是词汇选择错误,属于代词/词语使用错误。