Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Yes, I enjoy singing because it can help me relax and express my emotions. When I feel stressed, seeing my favorite songs can instantly lift my mood. Also, I think it is a fun way to connect with others in social gatherings.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
No, I haven't learned how to sing. I enjoy singing casually at home or in social gatherings with my friends. I think it can help me relax and express my emotions, and seeing is rather a hobby for me instead of a skill that is formally developed.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I want to sing for my family and my close friends because they are very supportive and always appreciate my efforts. Also, singing for the loved ones can create a warm and joyful atmosphere to strengthen our bond.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people. It is a great way to help people relax and relieve their stress. I think many people feel uplifted and joyful when seeing their favorite songs, either alone or with others.
Đánh giá
Tổng
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在用词错误（如“seeing my favorite songs”应为“singing my favorite songs”），且部分内容重复，建议注意词汇准确性并避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. When I feel stressed, singing my favorite songs instantly lifts my mood. Moreover, it is a fun way to connect with others during social gatherings.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中出现了明显的用词错误（如“seeing”应为“singing”），且句子结构不够清晰，建议加强词汇准确性和句子逻辑性。
Ví dụ: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally. I just enjoy singing casually at home or with friends during social gatherings. For me, singing is more of a hobby than a skill I have developed professionally.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答较为完整且表达清晰，但可以增加更多具体细节，使内容更丰富。建议在回答中加入具体场合或情感描述。
Ví dụ: I want to sing for my family and close friends because they are very supportive and always appreciate my efforts. For example, during family gatherings, singing together creates a warm and joyful atmosphere that strengthens our bond.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中再次出现“seeing their favorite songs”的错误，应为“singing”。此外，内容较为简单，建议增加具体例子或个人体验以丰富答案。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people. It helps them relax and relieve stress. For instance, when I sing my favorite songs with friends, it always lifts our spirits and makes us feel joyful.
Ngữ pháp
× When I feel stressed, seeing my favorite songs can instantly lift my mood.
✓ When I feel stressed, singing my favorite songs can instantly lift my mood.
这里'seeing'用法不当，应该用动名词'singing'表示唱歌的动作，'seeing'是看见，不符合语境。
× I think it can help me relax and express my emotions, and seeing is rather a hobby for me instead of a skill that is formally developed.
✓ I think it can help me relax and express my emotions, and singing is rather a hobby for me instead of a skill that is formally developed.
这里'seeing'用法错误，应为'singing'，表示唱歌作为爱好。
× I think many people feel uplifted and joyful when seeing their favorite songs, either alone or with others.
✓ I think many people feel uplifted and joyful when singing their favorite songs, either alone or with others.
这里'seeing'用法错误，应为'singing'，表示唱歌的动作。
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