Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use clear topic sentences and link your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'singing' multiple times, use pronouns or synonyms, and correct sentence structures.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and lift my mood. Although I'm not very skilled, I often sing for entertainment during my free time.

Gợi ý: Improve your grammar and sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid informal expressions like 'miss the boat'. Keep your answer direct and natural.

Ví dụ: No, I have never had the chance to learn how to sing formally. However, if I had the opportunity, I would definitely take it because I love singing.

Gợi ý: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Avoid filler words like 'like' and improve coherence by using linking words. Also, express your ideas more naturally and politely.

Ví dụ: Since I'm not very good at singing, I usually avoid singing in front of my family or close friends because I'm afraid they might tease me.

Gợi ý: Try to use more precise vocabulary and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid awkward phrasing.

Ví dụ: Definitely, I believe singing expresses emotions. Whether we're happy or sad, singing helps us forget our worries and feel happier, even if we're not very skilled.

× I'm just I used to do the singing because of having the entertainment.

✓ I just used to sing for entertainment.

The phrase 'I used to do the singing because of having the entertainment' is awkward and incorrect. 'Used to' should be followed by the base verb, so 'used to sing' is correct. Also, 'because of having the entertainment' is unnatural; 'for entertainment' is the proper expression.

× No, I haven't got a chance to learn about the singing, but if I got the opportunity to learn singing, I'll never miss the boat because as I also told you that I love singing.

✓ No, I haven't had a chance to learn singing, but if I get the opportunity to learn, I won't miss the boat because, as I told you, I love singing.

The phrase 'learn about the singing' is incorrect; we say 'learn singing' or 'learn to sing'. Also, 'haven't got' is better expressed as 'haven't had' in this context. The tense 'if I got' should be 'if I get' to match the future conditional. Commas are added for clarity.

× As I told you that I am not good at singing so if I have to sing for someone like for my family or for my like close friends I would not because they will mock on me as I don't know about the singing.

✓ As I told you, I am not good at singing, so if I have to sing for someone like my family or close friends, I would not because they would mock me since I don't know much about singing.

The phrase 'mock on me' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'mock me'. Also, 'don't know about the singing' should be 'don't know much about singing'. Commas are added for sentence clarity.

× Definitely yes, because I believe singing is a kind of emotion.

✓ Definitely yes, because I believe singing is a kind of emotion.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× Whenever we're feeling good or bad, we used to sing.

✓ Whenever we're feeling good or bad, we tend to sing.

The phrase 'we used to sing' implies a past habit, which conflicts with 'whenever' indicating a general present habit. 'We tend to sing' correctly expresses a habitual action in the present.

× Even we're not good at singing, but it is a kind of way because of which we can ignore our worries and feel happy.

✓ Even if we're not good at singing, it is a way through which we can ignore our worries and feel happy.

The original sentence has a redundant conjunction 'but' after 'even', which is incorrect. 'Even if' introduces a conditional clause properly. Also, 'a kind of way because of which' is awkward; 'a way through which' is clearer and grammatically correct.