Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且表达了喜爱唱歌的原因，但存在部分表达重复和用词不够准确的问题。建议避免重复表达，如“I'm really a singing lover”与“I love singing very much”意思重复。可以使用更准确的词汇替代“extend my mood”，如“improve my mood”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions and improves my mood. Whenever I feel happy or stressed, singing allows me to relax and feel better.

Gợi ý: 回答内容完整，但存在语法错误和重复，如“I feel that I felt that”和“I always I always”。建议注意时态一致，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child. My teacher taught me many useful techniques, and after her lessons, I felt that my singing improved. I often performed for my parents to make them happy.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了感谢的意图，内容具体，但句子结构稍显简单，且“my teacher”与“they”指代不够清晰。建议使用连接词增强逻辑性，并明确指代。

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for many people to show my gratitude, especially my teachers who have supported me throughout my academic life. Singing is a meaningful way for me to express my sincere thanks and emotions.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“boast singers”和“to show their happy to show their happiness”。建议注意词汇准确性，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Definitely yes. Singing brings happiness to both singers and listeners. For singers, it is a way to express their feelings and joy. Meanwhile, listeners can feel positive and uplifted when they hear beautiful songs.

× I think it's a good way for me to extend my mood and help me unwind and relax.

✓ I think it's a good way for me to express my mood and help me unwind and relax.

这里的 'extend my mood' 是不正确的表达，应该用 'express my mood' 来表示表达情绪。'extend' 意为延伸，不符合语境。

× After her lessons I feel that I felt that I could sing better and I always I always performed before my parents and to make them happy.

✓ After her lessons I felt that I could sing better and I always performed before my parents to make them happy.

句子中时态混乱，'I feel that I felt' 应该统一为过去时 'I felt'，因为描述的是过去的经历。重复的 'I always' 也应删除。

× Well, I want to sing for a lot of people to express my gratitude, especially my teacher. They helped me a lot during my academic life.

✓ Well, I want to sing for a lot of people to express my gratitude, especially my teachers. They helped me a lot during my academic life.

'my teacher' 是单数，但后文用复数代词 'They'，应保持一致，改为复数 'my teachers'。

× Singing can bring happiness to boast singers and listeners.

✓ Singing can bring happiness to both singers and listeners.

'boast' 用错了，正确表达应为 'both'，表示两者都包括。

× And to the listeners, it's listening to beautiful songs can make them feel positive.

✓ And to the listeners, listening to beautiful songs can make them feel positive.

句子中多余的 'it's' 导致结构错误，应删除，使句子结构正确。