Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但句子结构有些不自然，且存在语法错误，如“relax themselves”应为“help people relax”，“parents, friends and I”应调整顺序和用法。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意主语和宾语的搭配。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it brings happiness and helps people relax. Moreover, it can strengthen the bond between family members and friends.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“never taken”应为“have never taken”，“a just hobby”应为“just a hobby”。建议注意时态和冠词的正确使用，同时可以丰富内容，说明为什么不打算学习。

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons because I consider singing just a hobby, not a skill I need to develop professionally.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词“Because because”，且“seeing”应为“singing”。句子结构不够连贯，建议避免重复，注意单词拼写，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for people who are feeling depressed because I believe singing can motivate them and encourage a happier life.

Gợi ý: 回答中“a best way”应为“the best way”，“friends and friends”重复，且“parents and I”用法不当。建议注意冠词使用，避免重复，并正确使用代词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Singing is the best way to relax and relieve stress. Furthermore, it helps build closer relationships among friends and family members.

× Yes I do because singing can bring people happiness and relax themselves.

✓ Yes, I do because singing can bring people happiness and help them relax.

这里的'relax themselves'用法不正确，应该用动词不定式或动词原形来表达帮助别人放松，改为'help them relax'更自然。

× Also it can foster a closer relationship between parents, friends and I.

✓ Also it can foster a closer relationship between parents, friends and me.

在介词'before'后面应该用宾格代词，'I'应改为'me'。

× No I haven't. I never taken a formal singing lessons because in my opinion singing is a just hobby rather than a skill I need to develop.

✓ No, I haven't. I have never taken formal singing lessons because in my opinion singing is just a hobby rather than a skill I need to develop.

'never taken'前缺少助动词'have'，应为'have never taken'。'a formal singing lessons'中'lessons'是复数，前面不应有不定冠词'a'。另外，'a just hobby'中'just'位置错误，应为'just a hobby'。

× I want to sing for someone who is depressed. Because because I think seeing can bring them motivation and encourage them to live happily.

✓ I want to sing for someone who is depressed because I think singing can bring them motivation and encourage them to live happily.

句子中重复了'because'，且'seeing'应为'singing'。此外，'Because'不应单独成句，应与前句合并。

× Yes, I do, because singing is a best way to relax ourselves and relieve stress.

✓ Yes, I do, because singing is the best way to relax ourselves and relieve stress.

'a best way'中'best'是最高级，前面应使用定冠词'the'而非不定冠词'a'。

× What's more, it can build a closer relationship between friends and friends, parents and I.

✓ What's more, it can build a closer relationship between friends, parents, and me.

'friends and friends'重复，应去掉一个。'parents and I'中'I'应为宾格'me'。