Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then add specific examples using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Also, check for grammar and pronunciation to make your answer natural and effective.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have loved singing since my childhood. For example, I used to sing at school functions like Christmas celebrations and farewells. I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and improves my mood.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to avoid repeating the same information. Use a variety of vocabulary to make your answer more interesting.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have learnt how to sing by watching videos on YouTube. Additionally, my school teacher taught me rhymes and how to sing with correct lyrics, which helped me improve my skills.

Gợi ý: Try to organise your answer better by starting with a clear topic sentence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. Also, pay attention to grammar and sentence structure to make your answer more natural.

Ví dụ: I usually dedicate my songs to my husband and mother because they are very special to me. Moreover, I sing during festivals as it helps enhance my mood and makes me feel comfortable.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more coherent. Use linking words to connect your points logically. Avoid incomplete sentences and repetition. Try to provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: Of course, I believe singing brings happiness to people because it is a relaxing activity. Furthermore, it helps express emotions and improves mood, which contributes to overall happiness.

× I usually love singing since my childhood I was a singer in my school I used to sing in functions like Christmas and eat and also in farewells and I love singing because it gives me a kind of relaxation and it also enhance my.

✓ I have usually loved singing since my childhood. I was a singer in my school. I used to sing in functions like Christmas and Eid and also in farewells. I love singing because it gives me a kind of relaxation and it also enhances me.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'Usually love' should be 'have usually loved' to indicate a continuous action from the past to present. 'Enhance' should be 'enhances' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'eat' is likely a typo for 'Eid'. Breaking the long sentence into shorter ones improves clarity.

× Yes by watching videos on YouTube and also I have learned singing from my school teacher who used to teach me all the rhymes and how to sing with all the proper lyrics. So yes I have learned from my school teacher.

✓ Yes, by watching videos on YouTube and also I have learned singing from my school teacher who used to teach me all the rhymes and how to sing with all the proper lyrics. So yes, I have learned from my school teacher.

The original sentence is mostly correct in tense usage. Adding commas after 'Yes' improves readability. 'Have learned' is correct as it indicates past experience relevant to the present.

× I usually dedicate my songs to my husband and my mother because they are the special person.

✓ I usually dedicate my songs to my husband and my mother because they are special people.

'Person' is singular but refers to two individuals, so it should be plural 'people'. Also, 'the special person' is incorrect here because it refers to more than one person.

× They play a special role in my life, so I usually sing for them and also in my festivals.

✓ They play a special role in my life, so I usually sing for them and also during my festivals.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to events like festivals; 'during' is the correct preposition to indicate time periods.

× I used to sing because it enhances my mood and make me more comfortable.

✓ I usually sing because it enhances my mood and makes me more comfortable.

'Used to sing' implies past habit, but the context suggests a present habit, so 'usually sing' is better. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× Of course, I think singing brings more happiness in people's life at ease or way of relaxing and it also enhance to express the enhance the mood and also it helps to express the emotions.

✓ Of course, I think singing brings more happiness to people's lives as an easy way of relaxing. It also enhances the mood and helps to express emotions.

'In people's life' should be 'to people's lives' for correct preposition and plural form. 'Enhance' should be 'enhances' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The sentence was fragmented and unclear, so it was restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.