Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意发音和词汇的准确使用，同时避免冗余，保持句子简洁自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax. I often sing with my friends at our club, and we always have a great time together.

Gợi ý: 回答中多处词汇使用错误，句子结构混乱，建议加强基础语法和词汇学习，表达时注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

Ví dụ: I started learning to sing when I was in primary school because I wanted to become a musician. Since then, singing has been a big part of my life and has helped me express my emotions better.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，建议练习完整句子的表达，注意连接词的使用，使回答更连贯。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my dad because he has always encouraged me to become a musician. Singing for him would be a way to show my gratitude.

Gợi ý: 回答中词汇错误严重，表达不清晰，建议加强词汇积累和句子结构练习，确保表达准确且逻辑清晰。

Ví dụ: Actually, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps reduce stress and makes people feel joyful.

× Yes, I like saying because it can make me better and this street I always sing with my friend during club OK and it's a good time together.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it can make me better and on this street I always sing with my friend during club activities, and it's a good time together.

这里'saying'应改为'singing'，因为动词'like'后面接动名词形式表示喜欢做某事。

× I started not to see when I was primary school because I wanted to become a musician.

✓ I started to sing when I was in primary school because I wanted to become a musician.

'started not to see'结构不正确，应为'started to sing'，表示开始做某事。

× Since I was child I have always enjoyed seeing and practice to improve my skill.

✓ Since I was a child, I have always enjoyed singing and practicing to improve my skills.

'child'前缺少冠词'a'，'seeing'应为'singing'，'practice'应为动名词'practicing'，'skill'应为复数'skills'。

× Seeing has been a big part of my life and helped me increase my emotion better.

✓ Singing has been a big part of my life and has helped me improve my emotions.

'Seeing'应为'singing'，'helped'前应加助动词'has'，'increase my emotion better'表达不自然，改为'improve my emotions'更合适。

× I want to sing for my dad because I told him I want to be a musician, so he always encouraged me. So I want to sing for him can make me.

✓ I want to sing for my dad because I told him I want to be a musician, and he always encourages me. So I want to sing for him to show my gratitude.

句子结构混乱，'so I want to sing for him can make me'不通顺，改为'...to show my gratitude'更符合表达意图。

× Actually, I think seeing can bring happiness to people because seeing can make people better and less stress and music can make our happening.

✓ Actually, I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing can make people feel better and less stressed, and music can make us happy.

'seeing'应为'singing'，'make people better'应为'make people feel better'，'less stress'应为'less stressed'，'make our happening'表达错误，改为'make us happy'。