Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, correct small grammar mistakes like 'a any song' to 'any song'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and refresh my mind. Whenever I sing a song, I feel calm and happy, which is why I enjoy it so much.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammar errors and lacks coherence. Avoid repeating words like 'I I' and use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about what you learned.

Ví dụ: Yes, I learnt singing when I was in 7th class because our teacher had a pleasant voice and encouraged us to develop our skills by practicing different songs.

Gợi ý: Your answer is heartfelt but contains grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and correct errors like 'on mother' to 'my mother'. Use linking words to make your answer flow better.

Ví dụ: If I get a chance, I would love to sing a song for my mother because I find it hard to express my feelings directly, and singing helps me show my love and strengthen our bond.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains several grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct grammar, and avoid confusing phrases. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Singing helps people relax and reduces stress. When someone sings or dances, the positive thoughts from the song enter their mind, which brings happiness and peace.

× Yes, I like singing because I think I have a good voice and whenever I sing any song it gives me a kind of relaxation and fresh up my mind.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I think I have a good voice and whenever I sing any song it gives me a kind of relaxation and freshens up my mind.

The verb 'fresh up' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'freshens up' because the subject 'it' is singular and requires the third person singular form of the verb. Also, 'freshen up' is a phrasal verb meaning to make something fresh or refreshed, so it needs to be in the correct form to agree with the subject.

× So I prefer to sing a any song so that I can easily relax, feel relaxed.

✓ So I prefer to sing any song so that I can easily relax and feel relaxed.

The phrase 'a any song' is incorrect because 'any' is used without an article. The correct usage is simply 'any song'. Also, adding 'and' before 'feel relaxed' improves sentence flow.

× Yes, I remember that when I was in 7th class I I tried to learn singing from one of our teacher.

✓ Yes, I remember that when I was in 7th class I tried to learn singing from one of our teachers.

The phrase 'one of our teacher' is incorrect because 'one of' should be followed by a plural noun. Therefore, 'teachers' is correct. Also, the repeated 'I' is a typographical error and should be removed.

× She encouraged us so that we developed our skills and try to sing anything.

✓ She encouraged us so that we developed our skills and tried to sing anything.

The verb 'try' should be in past tense 'tried' to maintain consistency with 'developed' which is in past tense. Also, 'anything' is acceptable here but 'any song' might be clearer.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Whom do you want to sing for?

The correct object pronoun 'whom' should be used instead of 'who' because it is the object of the verb 'want to sing for'. However, in spoken English, 'who' is often used informally.

× If I get a chance, I will surely sing a song for my mother because I think that she's the only person whom I love very much.

✓ If I get a chance, I will surely sing a song for my mother because I think that she's the only person whom I love very much.

This sentence is grammatically correct in terms of preposition use; no correction needed here.

× But I cannot express my feelings so that whenever I get a chance, I will surely sing a song for on mother so that I can express my feelings openly and it creates a bond more strong.

✓ But I cannot express my feelings, so whenever I get a chance, I will surely sing a song for my mother so that I can express my feelings openly and it creates a stronger bond.

The phrase 'for on mother' is incorrect; it should be 'for my mother'. Also, 'more strong' is incorrect; the correct comparative form is 'stronger'. Additionally, 'so that' is used twice unnecessarily; the first can be replaced with a comma for better flow.

× Singing is a kind of activity with the help of which people can feel relaxed and keep their minds away from the stress.

✓ Singing is a kind of activity with the help of which people can feel relaxed and keep their minds away from stress.

The phrase 'the stress' is incorrect here because 'stress' is an uncountable noun used in general sense, so the definite article 'the' should be omitted.

× I think that by singing they can bring happiness because when a person for horizons dance, when a person sing any song, the thoughts and ideas of the song go into her mind is her mind and it help them to.

✓ I think that by singing they can bring happiness because when a person dances or sings any song, the thoughts and ideas of the song go into their mind and it helps them.

The phrase 'for horizons dance' is unclear and likely incorrect; it should be 'dances or sings'. Also, 'a person sing' should be 'a person sings' to agree with third person singular. 'Her mind is her mind' is redundant and incorrect; replaced with 'their mind'. 'It help them to' should be 'it helps them' for subject-verb agreement and completeness.