Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
I don't like singing because I because my singing is very bad, so I don't like sing.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
No, I never learned how to sing.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I want to sing for my mom because my mom is very beautiful and.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think sing can bring happiness to people because seeing is very, very fun and and enjoy and.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够流畅且有语法错误,表达重复。建议简洁明了地表达观点,避免重复,并注意语法正确。
Ví dụ: I don't like singing because I think my voice is not good enough.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁直接,但可以稍作扩展以丰富内容,例如说明原因或感受。
Ví dụ: No, I have never learned how to sing because I never had the chance to take lessons.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误,缺少具体细节。建议完整表达原因,并补充更多细节。
Ví dụ: I want to sing for my mom because she is very beautiful and kind, and I want to make her happy.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复,表达不清晰。建议使用正确的语法,避免重复,并具体说明原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it is fun and helps people relax.
× I don't like singing because I because my singing is very bad, so I don't like sing.
✓ I don't like singing because my singing is very bad, so I don't like singing.
动词后面需要用动名词形式(-ing),这里'sing'应改为'singing'。
× No, I never learned how to sing.
✓ No, I have never learned how to sing.
表示从过去到现在的经历时,应该用现在完成时,'never learned'应改为'have never learned'。
× I want to sing for my mom because my mom is very beautiful and.
✓ I want to sing for my mom because my mom is very beautiful.
句子末尾的'and'没有连接后续内容,导致句子结构不完整,应去掉。
× Yes, I think sing can bring happiness to people because seeing is very, very fun and and enjoy and.
✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing is very, very fun and enjoyable.
动词后应使用动名词形式,'sing'应改为'singing'。'seeing'应为'singing'。'enjoy'应改为形容词'enjoyable'以修饰句子。句中多余的'and'应删除。