Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lặp từ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have loved singing since I was a child. I used to attend a singing center to improve my skills. I hope to become a professional singer in the future.

Gợi ý: Bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, có cấu trúc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy thêm các chi tiết cụ thể và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have learned how to sing from my father, who is a music teacher. I really admire his teaching methods and have improved a lot thanks to him.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu chủ đề và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my mother because she means a lot to me. I even plan to write a new song dedicated to her to express my love and gratitude.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề, thêm chi tiết cụ thể và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời có tính liên kết cao hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely think singing brings happiness. On weekends, I often see people gathering to sing together, which helps them relax after a long week of work.

× Definitely years when I were a child, I had a I had a passion with singing.

✓ Definitely, when I was a child, I had a passion for singing.

The verb 'were' is incorrect for the singular subject 'I' in past tense; it should be 'was'. Also, 'passion with' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'passion for'.

× I had a passion with singing.

✓ I had a passion for singing.

The correct preposition to use with 'passion' is 'for', not 'with'.

× I I usually go to the singing center to graduate singing.

✓ I usually go to the singing center to practice singing.

The phrase 'to graduate singing' is incorrect and unclear. Likely, the intended meaning is 'to practice singing'. Also, the repeated 'I' is a redundancy error.

× Therefore in the future I went to be earns.

✓ Therefore, in the future, I want to be a singer.

The phrase 'I went to be earns' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The correct future tense expression is 'I want to be a singer'. 'Earns' is a verb form that does not fit here.

× Yes, I have ever learned singling by my father because he is a teacher who teach our Mediterranean power about how to sing, green sing, how to sing and I really admire his.

✓ Yes, I have learned singing from my father because he is a teacher who teaches our Mediterranean group about how to sing, and I really admire him.

'Have ever learned' is awkward; 'have learned' is sufficient. 'Singling' is a typo for 'singing'. 'Teach' should be 'teaches' for third person singular. 'Mediterranean power' is unclear; likely 'Mediterranean group' or similar. 'Green sing' is unclear and likely an error. 'Admire his' should be 'admire him'. These corrections improve clarity and grammar.

× he is a teacher who teach our Mediterranean power about how to sing

✓ he is a teacher who teaches our Mediterranean group about how to sing

The verb 'teach' should be 'teaches' to agree with the third person singular subject 'he'.

× I really admire his.

✓ I really admire him.

'His' is a possessive pronoun and cannot be used as the object of 'admire'. The correct object pronoun is 'him'.

× Hmm I think there are a flower people that's I want to sing for but I love them more in my family member is my mother therefore I choose her to sing and I can create a new song about my mother and.

✓ Hmm, I think there are a few people I want to sing for, but the person I love most in my family is my mother. Therefore, I choose to sing for her and create a new song about my mother.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Flower people' is likely 'a few people'. 'That's' is incorrect here. The sentence needs to be split for clarity and proper grammar.

× there are a flower people that's I want to sing for

✓ there are a few people that I want to sing for

'Flower' is a mishearing or typo for 'few', which is the correct quantifier here.

× I love them more in my family member is my mother

✓ the person I love most in my family is my mother

'Them' is plural and does not agree with 'my family member' which is singular. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× Yes def definitely at the weekend I see many people who usually seem together and it's going a comfortable feeling after the tiring hours of working before the rhythm of music. Make make music.

✓ Yes, definitely. At the weekend, I see many people who usually seem together, and it gives a comfortable feeling after the tiring hours of work, especially with the rhythm of music making.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Seem together' likely means 'gather together'. 'It's going a comfortable feeling' is incorrect; 'it gives a comfortable feeling' is correct. 'Make make music' is a repetition and unclear; rephrased to 'music making'.