Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“the singing helped”应为“singing helps”，且句子稍显冗长。建议注意时态一致性，避免多余冠词，并适当简化句子结构。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because I want to become a professional singer one day. Singing helps me relax and relieve stress after a busy day. It also allows me to express my emotions and feel happier.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整，但存在语法错误和表达不自然，如“when I grow up”应为“since I grew up”，“helped me improvised”应为“helped me improve”。建议注意时态和动词形式，使用更自然的表达。

Ví dụ: Actually, I haven't formally learned how to sing because I only had a music class in primary school. However, since I grew up, I often watch singing videos on TikTok, which have helped me improve my skills a little. I enjoy learning from these videos because they are easy to follow and very interesting.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了感情和理由，但存在语法错误，如“she was always encouraged me”应为“she has always encouraged me”。建议注意动词时态和语法，确保句子通顺。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my mom because she has always encouraged me since I told her I want to be a singer. Her advice is very helpful and motivates me to keep improving. I feel grateful for her support because it gives me confidence to pursue my dream.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在拼写错误和用词不当，如“exploit their emotions”应为“express their emotions”，“seeing”应为“singing”，且“someone feel”应为“someone feels”。建议加强拼写和语法检查，使用恰当词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and express their emotions. For example, whenever someone feels nervous or stressed, singing can calm their mind and make them feel better. This is why many people enjoy singing as a way to boost their mood.

× Besides, the singing helped me relax and relieve my stress after a busy day.

✓ Besides, singing helps me relax and relieve my stress after a busy day.

这里描述的是一般事实或习惯动作，应该使用一般现在时，而不是过去时。

× However, when I grow up, I often watch the videos about singing on TikTok, which helped me improvised skills a little bit.

✓ However, when I grow up, I often watch videos about singing on TikTok, which help me improve my skills a little bit.

句中“helped”应改为一般现在时“help”，因为描述的是经常发生的动作；“improvised”是过去式，且用法错误，应改为动词原形“improve”。

× I often watch the videos about singing on TikTok

✓ I often watch videos about singing on TikTok

“the videos”中的定冠词“the”不合适，应该去掉，表示泛指。

× she was always encouraged me since I told her I want to be a singer.

✓ she has always encouraged me since I told her I want to be a singer.

“was always encouraged me”结构错误，应为“has always encouraged me”，表示从过去持续到现在的动作。

× I want to sing for my mom because she was always encouraged me since I told her I want to be a singer.

✓ I want to sing for my mom because she has always encouraged me since I told her I want to be a singer.

“was always encouraged me”时态和语态错误，应使用现在完成时“has always encouraged me”表示持续的动作。

× whenever someone feel nervous or stressed, seeing can calm their mind and make them feel better.

✓ whenever someone feels nervous or stressed, singing can calm their mind and make them feel better.

“someone”是单数，谓语动词应加-s变为“feels”；“seeing”应为“singing”，拼写错误。