Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に直接答え、なぜ歌うことが好きかを明確に述べる必要があります。また、冗長な表現を避け、簡潔に答えましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. When I was a child, my mother often took me to karaoke, and we sang many songs together.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りが多く、表現が不自然です。質問に対して直接的に答え、なぜレッスンを受けていないのか、どのように練習しているのかを明確に述べましょう。

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken singing lessons. I usually practice singing by going to karaoke with my mother or friends, which helps me improve gradually.

Gợi ý: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に誤っています。質問に直接答え、誰のために歌いたいのか、理由を具体的に述べることが大切です。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my close friends because we have shared many wonderful memories together, and singing for them would be very special.

Gợi ý: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。歌が人々にどのように幸福をもたらすか、具体的に説明しましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because music helps me relax and feel energized. It has a positive influence on my mood and emotions.

× Yes, I like thinking at all because when I was child my mother text me at karaoke.

✓ Yes, I like singing a lot because when I was a child my mother took me to karaoke.

The verb 'text' is incorrect in this context; the past tense of 'take' is 'took'. Also, 'thinking' should be 'singing' to match the context. 'When I was child' is missing the article 'a'. 'At karaoke' should be 'to karaoke' to indicate going to a place.

× I and I, we were every sang a lot of things.

✓ My mother and I sang a lot of songs together.

The phrase 'I and I' is incorrect; it should be 'My mother and I'. 'We were every sang' is grammatically incorrect; 'sang' is the past tense of 'sing' and does not need 'were' or 'every'. 'A lot of things' is vague; 'a lot of songs' is more appropriate.

× Actually not. I've never go to the lessons of of singing.

✓ Actually, no. I've never gone to singing lessons.

The present perfect form requires the past participle 'gone' instead of 'go'. 'Lessons of of singing' is incorrect; it should be 'singing lessons'.

× I've I've go to karaoke to sing with my mother or with my friend only.

✓ I've only gone to karaoke to sing with my mother or my friend.

Again, 'go' should be 'gone' as the past participle. 'With my friend only' is better phrased as 'only with my mother or my friend' or 'with my mother or my friend only'.

× So my singing skills will improve by only only practicing.

✓ So my singing skills will improve only by practicing.

The phrase 'only only' is redundant; one 'only' is sufficient. The sentence structure is awkward; 'will improve only by practicing' is clearer.

× Oh, it's a nice question and I want to think for my friend.

✓ Oh, that's a nice question and I want to sing for my friend.

'I want to think for my friend' is incorrect; the verb 'think' does not fit here. The intended meaning is likely 'sing'.

× My it's my close friend because we had a lot of memories and yeah.

✓ She is my close friend because we have a lot of memories together.

'My it's my close friend' is ungrammatical; 'She is my close friend' is correct. 'Had' should be 'have' to indicate ongoing relationship. 'And yeah' is informal and unnecessary.

× Yes, because music has a lot of power to makes me relaxed and energies and so music and thinking is a very good influence to me to ask.

✓ Yes, because music has a lot of power to make me relaxed and energized, and so music and singing have a very good influence on me.

'Makes' should be 'make' after 'to' (infinitive). 'Relaxed and energies' is incorrect; 'relaxed and energized' is correct. 'Thinking' should be 'singing' to match context. 'Music and singing is' should be 'music and singing have' because the subject is plural. 'Influence to me to ask' is incorrect; 'influence on me' is correct.