Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ звучит естественно, но можно улучшить структуру и связность. Используйте связующие слова для плавного перехода между идеями и избегайте повторов, например, "helps me to get stressed out" лучше заменить на "helps me relieve stress".

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress and makes me feel happy. Moreover, singing allows me to express my emotions, which is very satisfying.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Следует использовать правильные формы глаголов и избегать тавтологии. Также стоит добавить связующие слова для логичности.

Ví dụ: Not really, because in my hometown there were no teachers who could help me learn singing. Therefore, I taught myself by watching videos and practicing on my own.

Gợi ý: Ответ не совсем ясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать правильные формы глаголов и более чётко выразить мысль, добавив связующие слова.

Ví dụ: I definitely want to sing for myself because I enjoy singing. It brings me joy and helps me relax.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит повторения и нечеткие формулировки. Рекомендуется использовать разнообразную лексику и структурировать ответ с помощью связующих слов.

Ví dụ: Of course, many people around the world enjoy singing because it helps reduce stress and allows them to express their feelings. In this way, singing can bring happiness to people.

× Absolutely, I really enjoy singing because it helps me to get stressed out and feel happy.

✓ Absolutely, I really enjoy singing because it helps me to get rid of stress and feel happy.

The phrase 'get stressed out' is awkward in this context. The correct expression is 'get rid of stress' or 'relieve stress' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Not really because in my hometown we didn't have teachers or teachers who helps us to learn how to sing.

✓ Not really because in my hometown we didn't have teachers or teachers who helped us to learn how to sing.

The verb 'helps' should be in past tense 'helped' to agree with the past tense context 'didn't have'. This is a past tense issue.

× I guess I learned it by myself while watching videos and practicing with my own.

✓ I guess I learned it by myself while watching videos and practicing on my own.

The phrase 'practicing with my own' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'practicing on my own' to indicate doing something independently.

× Definitely for myself because I really like singing and enjoying, so I will sing for myself.

✓ Definitely for myself because I really like singing and enjoy it, so I will sing for myself.

The phrase 'like singing and enjoying' is incorrect. 'Enjoying' should be replaced with 'enjoy' to maintain parallel structure and correct verb form.

× Of course, a lot of people of the world enjoy singing because singing helps reduce stress and express your feelings, express what you feel and a lot of things helps people help.

✓ Of course, a lot of people in the world enjoy singing because singing helps reduce stress and express their feelings, express what they feel, and many things help people.

The pronouns 'your' and 'people help' are incorrect here. 'Your' should be 'their' to match 'people', and 'a lot of things helps people help' is awkward and ungrammatical; it should be 'many things help people'.