Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do love it. I even go to the karaoke by myself. It's just a good way for me to recharge my battery and loosen up in my mind and the body.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
Actually now I've never been trained professionally. Umm, I mean I don't want to do these things to seriously. I just enjoy the emotion or beautiful rhythm.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
Actually I want to sing for myself. Sometimes I face a self doubt problem. In that time I will sing The Who sang the song Who says by Selena Gomez to myself. When I hear this, I can cheer up.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, doubly. I think singing is just like a nature of you human beings and you don't need to understand the lyrics. You can gut the emotions that singers want to express.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较自然且表达了个人感受,但部分表达不够地道,如“recharge my battery”可以用更常见的表达,且“loosen up in my mind and the body”语法不准确。建议使用更自然的短语,并注意语法准确性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing. I often go to karaoke alone because it helps me relax both mentally and physically.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够流畅,如“to seriously”应为“too seriously”,且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意语法和句子结构,使表达更准确自然。
Ví dụ: Actually, I have never received professional training. I don't want to take it too seriously; I just enjoy the emotions and beautiful rhythms in singing.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清,如“self doubt problem”应为“self-doubt”,且“The Who sang the song Who says by Selena Gomez”表达混乱。建议理清句子结构,准确表达意思。
Ví dụ: Actually, I like to sing for myself. When I feel self-doubt, I sing "Who Says" by Selena Gomez to cheer myself up.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇和语法错误,如“doubly”用法不当,“a nature of you human beings”表达不准确,“gut the emotions”用词错误。建议使用正确词汇和表达,确保句子通顺。
Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I think singing is a natural part of being human, and even if you don't understand the lyrics, you can still feel the emotions the singer wants to convey.
× I even go to the karaoke by myself.
✓ I even go to karaoke by myself.
这里的“the karaoke”中“karaoke”作为不可数名词,不需要加冠词“the”。
× I even go to the karaoke by myself.
✓ I even go to karaoke by myself.
“go to karaoke”是固定搭配,表示去唱卡拉OK,不需要加冠词“the”。
× Have you ever learnt how to sing?
✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?
“learnt”和“learned”都是“learn”的过去分词,英式英语用“learnt”,美式英语用“learned”,根据语境选择一致的时态形式。
× I don't want to do these things to seriously.
✓ I don't want to do these things too seriously.
“to seriously”应为“too seriously”,表示“过于认真”,这里“too”是副词,修饰形容词“seriously”。
× Sometimes I face a self doubt problem.
✓ Sometimes I face a self-doubt problem.
“self doubt”应连写为“self-doubt”,表示“自我怀疑”,且作为名词短语。
× In that time I will sing The Who sang the song Who says by Selena Gomez to myself.
✓ At that time, I will sing the song "Who Says" by Selena Gomez to myself.
“In that time”应为“At that time”,表示“那时”;“The Who sang the song”结构错误,应直接说“the song 'Who Says' by Selena Gomez”;“to myself”表示对自己唱歌,位置正确。
× Yes, doubly.
✓ Yes, definitely.
“doubly”意为“双重地”,此处应使用“definitely”,表示“肯定地”,更符合语境。
× I think singing is just like a nature of you human beings and you don't need to understand the lyrics.
✓ I think singing is just like the nature of you human beings and you don't need to understand the lyrics.
“nature”前应加定冠词“the”,表示“人类的天性”。
× You can gut the emotions that singers want to express.
✓ You can get the emotions that singers want to express.
“gut”是错误用词,应为“get”,表示“感受到”情感。