Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có vẻ không tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm giảm tính hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp lại câu hỏi và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng.

Ví dụ: No, I don't like singing because I lack confidence in my voice. I feel shy when performing in front of others since I think my voice is not good enough.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời thiếu sự hoàn chỉnh và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi chính tả. Hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

Ví dụ: No, I have never learned how to sing because I lack confidence in my singing ability. Also, I have never taken any singing classes, so I don't have the knowledge to improve it.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng, từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi chính tả. Thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: If I had a chance, I would like to sing with my crush because she has a beautiful and talented voice. She could guide me on how to sing and perform well on stage.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp, cấu trúc câu đúng và tránh lỗi chính tả. Hãy làm rõ ý và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I believe that singing brings a lot of happiness and fun to people because it allows them to express their emotions freely. For example, singing favorite songs can help people feel more relaxed and joyful.

× I I'm not very keen on singing because I'm like of confidence in my voice.

✓ I'm not very keen on singing because I lack confidence in my voice.

The phrase 'I'm like of confidence' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I lack confidence' to indicate the absence of confidence.

× I think my voice is not good so it's make me feel a little bit shy when I'm trying to speak and perform in front of others.

✓ I think my voice is not good so it makes me feel a little bit shy when I'm trying to speak and perform in front of others.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Sing well actually I have never learned how to sing because I like of confidence in my saying ability.

✓ Actually, I have never learned how to sing because I lack confidence in my singing ability.

The phrase 'I like of confidence' is incorrect; it should be 'I lack confidence'. Also, 'saying ability' is incorrect; the correct term is 'singing ability'.

× Besides I have never taken any class or lesson about seeing so I don't have any knowledge to improve it.

✓ Besides, I have never taken any class or lesson about singing so I don't have any knowledge to improve it.

The word 'seeing' is a typo or incorrect word here; it should be 'singing' to match the context.

× If I have the chance I.

✓ If I have the chance, I would like to learn how to sing.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb and object. It needs to be completed to convey a full idea.

× Actually, if I had a chance to sing with a person, I would prefer to sing with my crush because she is very beautiful and have a tented voice, so she can guide me how to sing and perform good in the in the stage.

✓ Actually, if I had a chance to sing with a person, I would prefer to sing with my crush because she is very beautiful and has a talented voice, so she can guide me on how to sing and perform well on the stage.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'she'. Also, 'tented' is a typo for 'talented'. 'Perform good' should be 'perform well' as 'well' is the correct adverb here. 'In the in the stage' should be 'on the stage'.

× Well, to be honest, I believe that seeing can brings a lot of happiness and fun to people because it's allowed them to express their emotion freely.

✓ Well, to be honest, I believe that singing can bring a lot of happiness and fun to people because it allows them to express their emotions freely.

The verb 'brings' should be 'bring' to agree with the modal verb 'can'. 'Seeing' is a typo for 'singing'. 'It's allowed' should be 'it allows' to match the subject and tense. 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions'.

× For example, when you try to sing their favorite songs, they wish help people to move.

✓ For example, when you try to sing your favorite songs, it will help people to move.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrect when referring to 'you'; it should be 'your'. 'They wish help people to move' is ungrammatical; it should be 'it will help people to move' to express the intended meaning.