Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了对唱歌的喜爱，但句子结构稍显重复，且缺少连接词使内容更连贯。建议在回答中使用连接词如“because”或“so”，并简化表达，使语言更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have loved singing since I was four years old because it brings me joy. Now, as a college student, I have more chances to perform for others, which makes me enjoy singing even more.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并用更准确的表达说明没有正式学过唱歌的原因。

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons because in China, students usually focus more on their main subjects rather than extracurricular activities like singing.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够准确的问题，如“who found me that I have a talent in saying”。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，并用连接词使内容更连贯。

Ví dụ: In the past, I loved singing for my mom because she was the first person to notice my talent. Now, since I study in another city, I usually sing for my friends, and they really enjoy it.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够流畅，有重复和语法错误。建议简化句子，使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Definitely. Whenever I sing, especially when my friends feel sad, the song can lift their spirits and make them feel happier and more energetic.

× Well, I remember once when I was just four years old, I started singing and I love it so much.

✓ Well, I remember once when I was just four years old, I started singing and I loved it so much.

这里描述的是过去的经历，动词时态应保持一致，'love' 应改为过去式 'loved'，表示过去的感受。

× I have more opportunities to sing to others, so I really love singing.

✓ I have more opportunities to sing for others, so I really love singing.

动词 'sing' 后面搭配的介词应为 'for'，表示为某人唱歌，而不是 'to'。

× Well, to be honest, I need to say that I have never been to learn how to sing because maybe in China, in China we are, we usually pay more attention on how to learn well, how to study well, but only on our own major.

✓ Well, to be honest, I need to say that I have never learned how to sing because maybe in China, we usually pay more attention to how to learn well, how to study well, but only on our own major.

'have never been to learn' 结构错误，应改为现在完成时 'have never learned'。另外，'pay attention on' 应改为 'pay attention to'，介词使用错误。

× we usually pay more attention on how to learn well, how to study well, but only on our own major.

✓ we usually pay more attention to how to learn well, how to study well, but only on our own major.

动词短语 'pay attention' 后应接介词 'to'，而不是 'on'。

× she's the first person that who found me that I have a talent in saying.

✓ she's the first person who found that I have a talent in singing.

关系代词 'that who' 用法错误，应使用 'who'。另外，'talent in saying' 应为 'talent in singing'，单词拼写错误。

× I have a talent in saying.

✓ I have a talent for singing.

表达“有某方面的天赋”时，常用介词 'for'，而不是 'in'。

× I just like to sing to my friends and they enjoy my singing.

✓ I just like to sing for my friends and they enjoy my singing.

同样，'sing' 后应接介词 'for'，表示为某人唱歌。

× when my friends are sad or have a bad emotion, they will feel that yeah, this song could give them some energy and give them some passionate yes, and also make them more happy.

✓ when my friends are sad or feeling down, they will feel that yeah, this song could give them some energy and passion, and also make them happier.

'have a bad emotion' 表达不自然，应改为 'feeling down'；'some passionate yes' 语义不明，应改为 'passion'；'more happy' 应改为比较级 'happier'。