Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question, but it could be improved by using more natural phrasing and avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of saying "in the front of others," you could say "in front of others." Also, try to add a linking phrase to make your answer flow better.

Ví dụ: No, I don't like singing because I lack confidence and feel shy when I sing in front of others.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Use past tense consistently and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I learned how to sing during my school days because we had a singing class, and I enjoyed it as a fun activity.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct verb forms. Also, provide specific reasons and use linking words to connect your points.

Ví dụ: I like to sing for my family because it helps me build confidence and strengthens our bond.

Gợi ý: Your answer is quite unclear and contains many hesitations and incomplete sentences. Try to organize your thoughts before speaking, use complete sentences, and avoid filler words like "uh." Provide specific examples and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Definitely, singing brings happiness to people. For example, many enjoy singing alone in the bathroom or car because it boosts their confidence and lifts their mood.

× In my school days I learn singing because we had one class of singing and I learned singing in my school and I also enjoy it as a fun activity.

✓ In my school days I learned singing because we had one class of singing and I learned singing in my school and I also enjoyed it as a fun activity.

The verb 'learn' should be in the past tense 'learned' to match the past time frame indicated by 'In my school days'. Also, 'enjoy' should be 'enjoyed' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Well, I like to singing for my family because I believe when I sit in the family I like to sing for them because in in family it enhances singing, enhanced my confidence and also show that.

✓ Well, I like to sing for my family because I believe when I sit with my family I like to sing for them because in a family it enhances singing, enhances my confidence and also shows that.

The phrase 'like to singing' is incorrect; it should be 'like to sing' because 'like to' is followed by the base form of the verb. Also, 'sit in the family' should be 'sit with my family' to use the correct preposition. 'In in family' should be 'in a family' to use the correct article. 'Enhanced' should be 'enhances' to maintain present tense and subject-verb agreement. 'Show' should be 'shows' for subject-verb agreement.

× No, I don't like singing because I am not confident and also feel shy when I sing in the front of others.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I am not confident and also feel shy when I sing in front of others.

The phrase 'in the front of others' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in front of others' without 'the'.

× Uh, definitely singing is the uh happiness is the second name of singing. Like uh to be too big, more confident. People like to sing music in the bathroom as well as car. Also after singing in in alone, they enjoy a lot and also feel.

✓ Uh, definitely singing is happiness itself. It helps to be bigger and more confident. People like to sing music in the bathroom as well as in the car. Also, after singing alone, they enjoy it a lot and also feel good.

The original sentences have several tense and structure issues. 'Singing is the uh happiness is the second name of singing' is awkward; 'singing is happiness itself' is clearer. 'Like uh to be too big, more confident' is unclear; corrected to 'It helps to be bigger and more confident' to express the intended meaning. 'People like to sing music in the bathroom as well as car' needs 'in the car' for correct preposition. 'After singing in in alone' should be 'after singing alone'. Added 'it' after 'enjoy' for correct object usage. Added 'feel good' to complete the thought.