Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural by using correct tenses and clearer sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add a reason or example using linking words.

Ví dụ: I used to love singing when I was a child, but now I don't have much time because of my busy schedule. Therefore, I don't prefer singing these days.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar to make your answer more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I learned some basics by watching tutorials on Google since I didn't know whom to ask for help.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and some redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and correct sentence structures. Also, be specific about your intentions to make your answer more effective.

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my fiancé because he is a talented and passionate singer. I plan to dedicate a song I have written for him on our wedding day.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but is somewhat disorganized and contains grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your points logically and avoid repetition. Also, try to be more specific and clear in your explanations.

Ví dụ: I believe singing brings happiness because it makes me feel joyful. Moreover, people who listen to music often feel nostalgic or relaxed, especially when songs are about nature. Therefore, singing and listening to music can improve people's mood.

× Definitely when I was child I love to sing at that time, but if I talk about now as I have been scheduled so I don't have enough time to sing.

✓ Definitely, when I was a child, I loved to sing at that time, but if I talk about now, as I have been scheduled, I don't have enough time to sing.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Love' should be in past tense 'loved' to match 'when I was a child'. Also, 'a child' requires the article 'a'. Adding commas improves clarity.

× Definitely when I was child I love to sing at that time, but if I talk about now as I have been scheduled so I don't have enough time to sing.

✓ Definitely, when I was a child, I loved to sing at that time, but if I talk about now, as I have been scheduled, I don't have enough time to sing.

The noun 'child' is singular and countable, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× So I think now I don't prefer to singing.

✓ So I think now I don't prefer singing.

'Prefer' is followed directly by the gerund form without 'to'. Using 'to singing' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer singing'.

× Certainly not, I never learned, but definitely I learned from Google because at at that time, I don't know how to go to anyone and ask for how to sing.

✓ Certainly not, I never learned, but definitely I learned from Google because at that time, I didn't know how to go to anyone and ask how to sing.

The phrase 'I don't know' should be in past tense 'I didn't know' to maintain consistency with the past context.

× So at that time I open I, I searched for a song on Google and at that time I I learned from Google.

✓ So at that time I opened, I searched for a song on Google and at that time I learned from Google.

'Open' should be in past tense 'opened' to match the past narrative. Also, the sentence has repeated 'I' which should be corrected for clarity.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ For whom do you want to sing?

In formal English, 'whom' is the correct object pronoun after a preposition like 'for'. However, in spoken English, 'Who do you want to sing for?' is commonly accepted.

× Definitely I want to sing for my fiance because as he is very good at singing and also he is very passionate about his work and so that's why I just want to dedicate a song which I written for him on on my marriage.

✓ Definitely, I want to sing for my fiancé because he is very good at singing and also very passionate about his work, so that's why I just want to dedicate a song which I have written for him on my marriage.

'Fiancé' needs an accent and is a singular noun. 'Which I written' is incorrect; it should be 'which I have written' (present perfect tense). Also, 'on on' is a repetition and should be corrected to 'on'. Commas improve sentence clarity.

× Definitely I want to sing for my fiance because as he is very good at singing and also he is very passionate about his work and so that's why I just want to dedicate a song which I written for him on on my marriage.

✓ Definitely, I want to sing for my fiancé because he is very good at singing and also very passionate about his work, so that's why I just want to dedicate a song which I have written for him on my marriage.

The phrase 'as he is' is unnecessary and awkward here; removing 'as' improves sentence flow. Also, 'which I written' lacks the auxiliary verb 'have' for present perfect tense.

× People definitely if I talk about myself, whenever I sing I feel very happy and if I talk about the other person, whoever listen to the music, he or she always feel nostalgic.

✓ People definitely, if I talk about myself, whenever I sing I feel very happy and if I talk about other people, whoever listens to the music, he or she always feels nostalgic.

'Whoever listen' should be 'whoever listens' to agree in number and person. Also, 'he or she always feel' should be 'he or she always feels'. 'The other person' is better as 'other people' to match 'people'.

× And also some songs are related to the environment. They they just love to be in the lap of the nature.

✓ And also some songs are related to the environment. They just love to be in the lap of nature.

The phrase 'the nature' is incorrect; 'nature' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'the' in this context.