Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免冗长，使用更准确的词汇表达情感和原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it is a fun way to express my emotions. I often sing for my family and friends to help them relax.

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和词汇使用错误，建议直接回答问题并用连贯的句子描述学习经历。

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in primary school. I practiced basic scales and sang simple songs like birthday songs.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词有误，建议明确表达想为谁唱歌及原因，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for strangers, especially foreigners, because performing in front of them helps me build confidence and become more outgoing.

Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to people. When I sing, I see smiles on their faces, which makes me feel happy too.

× As for me, I'm a big fan of singing because through thing it's quite a fun way to express my emotions and I always sing to my family and friends which can help them unwind.

✓ As for me, I'm a big fan of singing because through this thing it's quite a fun way to express my emotions and I always sing to my family and friends which can help them unwind.

句中 'through thing' 应为 'through this thing'，缺少指示代词，导致表达不完整。

× Years, if my memory serves me right, I remembered that I learned how to think when I was a kid.

✓ Years ago, if my memory serves me right, I remember that I learned how to sing when I was a kid.

原句中 'Years' 不完整，应为 'Years ago'；'remembered' 应用现在时 'remember'，因为是回忆当前的记忆；'think' 应为 'sing'，语义错误。

× In primary school. I learned some basic thin scales and learn to sing some simple songs like birthday songs.

✓ In primary school, I learned some basic thin scales and learned to sing some simple songs like birthday songs.

句子中 'learn' 时态不一致，应与前文 'learned' 保持一致，使用过去式。

× Actually, I want to sing for strangers, especially foreigners because stay in front of them, which can help me to build confidence and make me more outgoing.

✓ Actually, I want to sing for strangers, especially foreigners, because standing in front of them can help me to build confidence and make me more outgoing.

'stay in front of them' 用法错误，应为 'standing in front of them'，表示动作的进行。

× I guess you can say so despite am not a professional in saying, but by saying can bring countless happiness to people around me and I can see their smell when I'm seeing.

✓ I guess you can say so despite I am not a professional in singing, but singing can bring countless happiness to people around me and I can see their smiles when I'm singing.

'am not' 缺少主语，应为 'I am not'；'in saying' 应为 'in singing'；'by saying' 应为 'singing'；'their smell' 应为 'their smiles'；'when I'm seeing' 应为 'when I'm singing'，多处词汇错误和代词使用错误。

× So it's very happy way to do that.

✓ So it's a very happy way to do that.

'happy' 是形容词，修饰 'way' 时需要冠词 'a'，且 'happy' 用作形容词修饰名词，句中缺少冠词。