Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and natural, but it contains some redundancy and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating the same idea multiple times and keep your sentences concise. Also, correct the phrase "I always been" to "I have always been". Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. Although I'm not very good at it, I have always been passionate about singing. In fact, I often sing in the bathroom for fun.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some irrelevant information (like "different rocks"). Try to focus on the main point and provide clear, specific details. Also, avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I tried to learn singing when I was a kid in elementary school. I also attended music classes where I learned about different musical instruments and basic singing techniques.

Gợi ý: Your answer is too short and lacks explanation. Try to provide a reason or additional detail to support your answer. This will make your response more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: I don't want to sing for anyone because I feel shy and prefer singing just for myself to relax.

Gợi ý: Your answer conveys the main idea but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: No doubt, singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and express their inner thoughts. Therefore, it is a good way for people to open up and feel joyful.

× All the while I'm not very good at singing.

✓ All the while, I'm not very good at singing.

The sentence is grammatically correct but missing a comma after 'All the while' which is an introductory phrase. Adding the comma improves clarity and flow.

× Still, I have been always passionate.

✓ Still, I have always been passionate.

The adverb 'always' should be placed before the past participle 'been' in the present perfect tense. The correct order is 'have always been' to maintain proper English syntax.

× I always been.

✓ I have always been.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense. 'I have always been' is the correct form to express a continuous state up to the present.

× Yes, I tried to learn when I was a kid and I was in my elementary school at that time.

✓ Yes, I tried to learn when I was a kid and I was in elementary school at that time.

The phrase 'my elementary school' is incorrect here because it refers to a general period of schooling, not a specific school owned by the speaker. Removing 'my' is appropriate.

× In school also I used to learn about the different rocks and musical instruments and in and personally also I was going to music classes.

✓ In school, I also used to learn about different rocks and musical instruments, and personally, I was also going to music classes.

The sentence has awkward phrasing and missing commas. Adding commas and reordering words improves clarity. 'Used to learn' is correct for past habitual actions.

× It always help them to relax and express their inner thoughts.

✓ It always helps them to relax and express their inner thoughts.

The subject 'It' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'helps' to agree in number and person.

× So I think this is the this is quite a good way to express themselves, to open up.

✓ So I think this is quite a good way for them to express themselves and to open up.

The original sentence has repetition and incorrect pronoun reference. 'This is quite a good way for them to express themselves' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× So yeah, who would never be happy to express.

✓ So yeah, who wouldn't be happy to express themselves?

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. Adding 'wouldn't' and 'themselves' completes the thought and makes it grammatically correct.