Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和重复，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更准确的词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relieve stress. When I'm alone at home, I enjoy using an app called We Sing, which makes singing fun and enjoyable.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用正确的时态和句型，避免重复，并用连词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't had many opportunities to learn singing because I've been busy with work. However, if I get a chance, I would definitely try it because I enjoy singing and believe it would benefit me. I especially want to learn from a professional coach to improve my skills.

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，表达混乱，建议直接回答问题，使用简洁明了的句子，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

Ví dụ: I usually sing for myself because singing is a personal way to relieve my stress. It helps me feel better and doesn't involve others.

Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法错误和重复，表达不完整，建议简化句子，使用连贯的结构，并具体说明原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their feelings. Many people enjoy singing as a way to feel joyful and relaxed.

× Yes, I like singing because I feel like singing it's a really good way to express my stress and when I am all alone I like to stay at my house with an app called We Sing and it's really really sing and makes me enjoyable.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I feel like singing is a really good way to express my stress, and when I am all alone, I like to stay at my house with an app called We Sing, and it's really really fun and makes me enjoy myself.

句中“feel like singing it's a really good way”缺少动词连接，应为“feel like singing is a really good way”。“it's really really sing”中“sing”用词错误，应为形容词“fun”。“makes me enjoyable”应为“makes me enjoy myself”，因为“enjoyable”是形容词，不能直接用作动词宾语。建议注意动词与动名词的正确搭配及形容词的正确使用。

× No, I haven't had, I haven't had many opportunities to learn sing because I haven't been really busy with my work.

✓ No, I haven't had many opportunities to learn to sing because I've been really busy with my work.

句中“learn sing”缺少不定式“to”，应为“learn to sing”。“haven't been really busy”与句意不符，应为“have been really busy”，表示过去一段时间一直很忙。建议注意动词时态和不定式的正确使用。

× However, if I get a chance I would definitely try it and it's really enjoy to singing and I believe it would be beneficial for me.

✓ However, if I get a chance, I would definitely try it, and it's really enjoyable to sing, and I believe it would be beneficial for me.

“it's really enjoy to singing”中“enjoy”应为形容词“enjoyable”，且“to singing”应为不定式“to sing”。建议注意形容词和动词不定式的正确形式。

× I will especially like to learn from professional coach and improve my skills.

✓ I would especially like to learn from a professional coach and improve my skills.

“I will especially like”时态不合适，表达愿望应使用“would like”。“professional coach”前缺少冠词“a”。建议注意情态动词的使用和冠词的正确使用。

× Well, I think the people that I want to sing for, which is me, because the saying is very personal for me, this stuff, and it doesn't really, you know, like about anyone else.

✓ Well, I think the person that I want to sing for is myself, because the singing is very personal for me, and it doesn't really, you know, relate to anyone else.

“the people that I want to sing for, which is me”中“people”与“me”不匹配，应为“person”或使用反身代词“myself”。“the saying”应为“the singing”。“like about anyone else”表达不清，应为“relate to anyone else”。建议注意代词的一致性和词汇的准确使用。

× And I sing only for myself because it's really make me stress less.

✓ And I sing only for myself because it really makes me less stressed.

“it's really make me stress less”中“make”应为第三人称单数形式“makes”，“stress less”表达不自然，应为“less stressed”。建议注意主谓一致和形容词的正确使用。

× Yes, I do think seeing can bring happiness to people because when I say, when I'm saying I I feel happiness And at the same time, there's many people out there who like to sing and I think singing is really a way to, you know, express someone's feeling and or know you they can express their.

✓ Yes, I do think singing can bring happiness to people because when I sing, I feel happiness. And at the same time, there are many people out there who like to sing, and I think singing is really a way to, you know, express someone's feelings, or you know, they can express their emotions.

“seeing”应为“singing”。“when I say, when I'm saying I I feel happiness”表达重复且错误，应为“when I sing, I feel happiness”。“there's many people”应为“there are many people”，主谓一致。句尾不完整，补充“express their emotions”。建议注意词汇拼写、主谓一致和句子完整性。