Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because music brings me peace and helps me express myself. Singing my favorite trendy songs always makes me feel cheerful and relaxed.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your sentences and use proper grammar. Use linking words to explain your learning method clearly.

Ví dụ: Actually, I haven't taken any professional singing classes, but I have learned by watching videos and repeating the lyrics along with the music. This self-practice has helped me improve my singing skills.

Gợi ý: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Avoid using incorrect words like 'sew' instead of 'show'. Make your sentences clearer and more structured with linking words.

Ví dụ: Actually, I don't think my voice is very good, so I prefer not to perform in public. However, I enjoy singing for my close family and friends.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more coherent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Provide specific reasons or examples.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it connects people emotionally through music. For example, singing together can create a sense of unity and joy among friends.

× Yes, I'm very fond of music and I love to sing because music is the thing that makes me peace, that keeps me peace and have to unveil myself.

✓ Yes, I'm very fond of music and I love to sing because music is the thing that gives me peace, keeps me peaceful, and helps me to unveil myself.

The phrase 'makes me peace' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'gives me peace' or 'brings me peace'. Also, 'keeps me peace' should be 'keeps me peaceful' to use the correct adjective form. The conjunction 'and have to unveil myself' is incorrect; it should be 'and helps me to unveil myself' to properly connect the ideas.

× And singing my favorite songs are a new trendy song helps me to be cheerful.

✓ And singing my favorite songs or a new trendy song helps me to be cheerful.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes plural and singular subjects without proper conjunction. 'Singing my favorite songs are a new trendy song' is incorrect because 'songs' is plural and 'a new trendy song' is singular. Using 'or' correctly connects the singular and plural options, and the verb 'helps' agrees with the singular subject closest to it.

× Actually, no. I haven't learned how to sing by taking some professional or classes or training, but I have learned by watching the videos and repeating the lyrics with the music and the song.

✓ Actually, no. I haven't learned how to sing by taking any professional classes or training, but I have learned by watching videos and repeating the lyrics with the music and the song.

The phrase 'some professional or classes or training' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'any professional classes or training' to correctly express the negative context. Also, 'the videos' is better as 'videos' to generalize the statement.

× That's how I learned as a.

✓ That's how I learned.

The sentence 'That's how I learned as a.' is incomplete and lacks a clear object or complement after 'as a'. Removing 'as a' corrects the sentence structure and makes it complete.

× Actually my voice is not so nice so I don't want to sew or perform singing to any other general public like but I can sing song for my family and friends who are really close to me.

✓ Actually, my voice is not so nice, so I don't want to show or perform singing to the general public, but I can sing songs for my family and friends who are really close to me.

The word 'sew' is a wrong homophone; it should be 'show'. The phrase 'perform singing to any other general public like' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'perform singing to the general public'. Also, 'sing song' should be 'sing songs' to use the plural form correctly.

× Yes, of course, singing can bring happiness to the people because singing connects with the music and music helps to connect with people by emotionally.

✓ Yes, of course, singing can bring happiness to people because singing connects with music and music helps to connect with people emotionally.

The phrase 'connects with the music' is better as 'connects with music' to generalize. The phrase 'helps to connect with people by emotionally' is incorrect; 'by' should be removed and 'emotionally' placed directly after 'people' to correctly modify the verb.

× So singing can bring happiness, it brings all the peace.

✓ So singing can bring happiness; it brings peace.

The original sentence is a comma splice, joining two independent clauses with a comma. Replacing the comma with a semicolon or splitting into two sentences corrects the structure. Also, 'all the peace' is awkward; 'peace' alone is sufficient.