Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Because I think it's interesting.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
I never learned how to sing. I just listen alone and I can see.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I want to sing for my owl.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think things can bring happy to people.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短且不自然,缺乏具体细节和连贯性。建议直接回答问题并补充原因,使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it allows me to express my emotions and relax after a busy day.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不清晰且语法错误,表达不自然。建议直接回答并解释原因,避免模糊表达。
Ví dụ: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I enjoy listening to music and trying to sing along.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不明确且不合逻辑,缺乏具体信息。建议明确回答并说明原因,使内容更具体。
Ví dụ: I want to sing for my family because they always support me and it makes them happy.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误且表达模糊,缺乏具体说明。建议直接回答并解释原因,使用正确的词汇和句式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and enjoy the moment.
× I never learned how to sing.
✓ I have never learned how to sing.
这里使用现在完成时更合适,因为表示从过去到现在的经历。学生使用了一般过去时,建议改为现在完成时以符合语境。
× I just listen alone and I can see.
✓ I just listen alone and I can imagine.
句中 'I can see' 用法不当,应该用 'imagine' 表达通过听觉想象画面。'listen' 应用一般现在时,'can see' 语义不符。
× I want to sing for my owl.
✓ I want to sing for my family.
'my owl' 可能是拼写错误或用词不当,通常不会为猫头鹰唱歌,应该是 'my family' 或其他合适对象。建议根据语境更正。
× Yes, I think things can bring happy to people.
✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people.
'bring happy' 语法错误,'happy' 是形容词,应该用名词 'happiness'。同时,'things' 不明确,改为 'singing' 更符合上下文。