Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，"Why I like singing?"应改为"Why do I like singing?"，且"I often say my favorite songs"表达不准确，应使用"I often sing my favorite songs"。建议注意语法结构和词汇的准确使用。

Ví dụ: I like singing because it helps me feel relaxed and happy. For example, I often sing my favorite songs when I get home, which helps me relieve stress and improve my mood.

Gợi ý: 回答中"music is flexible"表达不清晰，可能想表达"music is diverse"或"music is complex"。建议使用更准确的词汇表达观点，并且可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing in music class when I was in primary school. I think music is diverse and sometimes difficult to master.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但"It made her very happy"时态不一致，建议使用现在时"It makes her very happy"。此外，可以使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my daughter because she loves singing. For example, she often sings the song "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star" and always invites me to sing with her, which makes her very happy.

Gợi ý: 回答中出现拼写错误，"seeing"应为"singing"，且最后一句表达不完整，建议改为"I always seem to improve my mood by singing."。建议注意拼写和句子完整性。

Ví dụ: From my perspective, singing can bring happiness to people because it helps relieve stress and makes them feel relaxed. When I feel sad, I always seem to improve my mood by singing.

× Why I like singing?

✓ Why do I like singing?

该句是疑问句，英语疑问句中需要使用助动词“do”来构成疑问形式，且主语和助动词需要倒装。原句缺少助动词，结构不正确。

× I often say my favorite songs when I get home, which helps me relieve stress and improve my mood.

✓ I often sing my favorite songs when I get home, which helps me relieve stress and improve my mood.

动词“say”不适合表达唱歌的动作，应该使用“sing”。“sing”是动词原形，符合句意。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

“learnt”和“learned”都是“learn”的过去分词，前者为英式英语，后者为美式英语。根据上下文和常用表达，建议使用“learned”。

× I think music is flexible and hard to learn.

✓ I think music is complex and hard to learn.

“flexible”意为“灵活的”，用来形容音乐不合适，应该用“complex”（复杂的）更符合语境。

× For example, she often sings the song Twinkle Twinkle Little * and she always invites me to sing with her.

✓ For example, she often sings the song Twinkle Twinkle Little Star and she always invites me to sing with her.

原句中歌曲名称不完整，缺少“Star”，导致句子不完整且意义不明确。

× It made her very happy.

✓ It makes her very happy.

根据上下文，描述的是经常发生的情况，应该使用一般现在时“makes”，而非过去时“made”。

× From my perspective, seeing can bring happiness to people because it helps relieve stress and makes them feel relaxed.

✓ From my perspective, singing can bring happiness to people because it helps relieve stress and makes them feel relaxed.

“seeing”是“看见”的意思，语境中应为“singing”（唱歌），原句用词错误。

× When I feel sad, I always seem to improve my mood.

✓ When I feel sad, I always try to improve my mood.

“seem to improve”意思是“似乎改善”，不符合语境，应该用“try to improve”表示努力改善情绪。