Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答が少し冗長で、文法的にも不完全な部分があります。より自然で効果的な答えにするために、文を簡潔にし、理由を明確に述べることが重要です。例えば、"I like singing, especially with my friends, because it is enjoyable and I enjoy listening to their voices."のように表現すると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I like singing, especially with my friends, because it is enjoyable and I enjoy listening to their voices.

Gợi ý: 答えが途中で終わっており、内容が不十分です。質問に直接答えた後、理由や背景を具体的に述べることが必要です。例えば、"No, I haven't learned how to sing, but I want to learn because karaoke is very popular in Japan and I want to enjoy it more."のように答えると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't learned how to sing, but I want to learn because karaoke is very popular in Japan and I want to enjoy it more.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りや冗長な表現があります。より自然で効果的な答えにするために、文を整理し、理由を明確に述べることが大切です。例えば、"I want to sing for my friends because I often go to karaoke with them and enjoy their singing. I hope my songs can make them happy."のように表現すると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my friends because I often go to karaoke with them and enjoy their singing. I hope my songs can make them happy.

Gợi ý: 答えが不完全で、文法的な誤りもあります。質問に対して明確に答え、具体的な理由や感情を述べることが重要です。例えば、"Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. When I listen to songs I like, I feel happy and encouraged."のように答えると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. When I listen to songs I like, I feel happy and encouraged.

× I like singing, but I like singing with my friends because it is very enjoyable and I also like to listen to their songs, their singing and I also like the.

✓ I like singing, but I like singing with my friends because it is very enjoyable and I also like to listen to their songs and their singing.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and I also like the.' which is incomplete and incorrect use of the definite article 'the'. The phrase should be completed or removed to avoid confusion and grammatical error.

× Actually, no, I haven't learned how to sing ever. But I I think I wanted to learn because in Japan there is karaoke and there are.

✓ Actually, no, I haven't learned how to sing yet. But I think I want to learn because in Japan there is karaoke.

The phrase 'I wanted to learn' is past tense but the context suggests a present desire, so 'I want to learn' is correct. Also, 'there are' is incomplete and should be removed or completed. 'Ever' is better replaced with 'yet' in negative present perfect sentences.

× I always went to karaoke with my friend and I really enjoy listen to their song so I I also want to make them feel happy with my song.

✓ I always go to karaoke with my friends and I really enjoy listening to their songs so I also want to make them feel happy with my songs.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'their'. 'Went' is past tense but the context suggests habitual action, so 'go' is correct. 'Listen' should be 'listening' after 'enjoy'. 'Song' should be plural 'songs' to match 'their'.

× Yes, I think it. I think so. When I hear to the song, I always feel very happy and I get the powerfulness and also I'm encouraged listening to the song I like and also.

✓ Yes, I think so. When I hear the song, I always feel very happy and I get a sense of power and also I'm encouraged listening to the songs I like.

The phrase 'hear to the song' is incorrect; 'hear' does not require 'to'. 'The powerfulness' is awkward; 'a sense of power' is more natural. The sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity.