Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer shows your feelings about singing, but it is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise, and avoid redundancy. Also, clarify the place you mention and use correct prepositions. For example, say "I like singing because it helps me relax when I feel stressed. I often go to a karaoke bar called KTV to sing."

Ví dụ: I enjoy singing because it helps me relax when I'm stressed. For instance, I often go to a karaoke bar called KTV with my friends to sing and unwind.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains mistakes, such as "never learned how to think" instead of "never learned how to sing." Try to answer directly and clearly, and use proper grammar. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas. For example, "I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I use my mobile phone to watch videos and learn singing techniques."

Ví dụ: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I often watch videos on my mobile phone to learn singing techniques and improve my skills.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and repetition. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, "I would like to sing for my family because they are very busy with work. Singing for them can help them relax and feel closer to me."

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my family because they are often busy with work. By singing for them, I hope to help them relax and strengthen our bond.

Gợi ý: Your answer repeats ideas and has some unclear phrases. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your points. For example, "Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it reduces stress and makes people feel joyful."

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps reduce stress and makes people feel joyful and relaxed.

× Yes, I like singing because when I have many or high pressure, I will go to the singing to reduce my pressure if you let me feel relaxed in my life.

✓ Yes, I like singing because when I have a lot of pressure, I go singing to reduce my pressure and help me feel relaxed in my life.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'will' for a habitual action, which should be in the present simple tense. Also, 'the singing' is incorrect; 'singing' as an activity does not need 'the'. The phrase 'if you let me feel relaxed' is unclear and unnecessary here, so it was removed for clarity.

× So I like go to the Cativate 2 singing, KTV 2 singing, yes, All right.

✓ So I like going to Cativate 2 singing, KTV 2 singing, yes, all right.

The phrase 'like go to' is incorrect; it should be 'like going to' because 'like' is followed by a gerund when expressing preference. Also, 'the' before 'Cativate 2 singing' is unnecessary if it is a proper noun or place name.

× Yeah, I have never learned how to think.

✓ Yeah, I have never learned how to sing.

The original sentence says 'learned how to think' which is likely a mistake; it should be 'learned how to sing' to match the context. The tense 'have never learned' is correct for expressing experience up to now.

× I will use the mobile phone to learn how to sing because I can watch many videos to learn skills, to learn the singing skills.

✓ I use my mobile phone to learn how to sing because I can watch many videos to learn skills, to learn singing skills.

'Will use' is incorrect here because the action is habitual, so present simple 'use' is appropriate. Also, 'the mobile phone' is better as 'my mobile phone' to indicate possession. 'The singing skills' should be 'singing skills' without 'the'.

× I would like to sing for my family because my family is very busy they are they are is very busy for their work.

✓ I would like to sing for my family because they are very busy with their work.

The original sentence repeats 'they are' and uses 'is' incorrectly. Also, 'for their work' should be 'with their work'. The pronoun 'they' replaces 'my family' to avoid repetition.

× So I will like to my family to see it can close it and relax everything.

✓ So I would like my family to be able to relax and forget everything.

The phrase 'I will like to my family to see it can close it' is ungrammatical and unclear. It was corrected to express the intended meaning clearly: wanting family to relax and forget their worries.

× Yeah, I think singing can bring happiness to people because I say the before the singing, it can reduce the pressure and let the people feel feel happy and feel joyful and feel joyful.

✓ Yeah, I think singing can bring happiness to people because before singing, it can reduce pressure and make people feel happy and joyful.

The phrase 'I say the before the singing' is incorrect and unclear; it was removed. 'Let the people feel feel happy and feel joyful' is redundant and awkward; corrected to 'make people feel happy and joyful' for clarity and correctness.

× So I think the thing can bring happiness.

✓ So I think singing can bring happiness.

The phrase 'the thing' is vague and unclear. It was replaced with 'singing' to clearly refer to the subject discussed, improving sentence clarity and structure.