Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer should be more natural and clear. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrases like 'admire to listen'. Instead, directly express your feelings about singing and specify the types of music you enjoy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love singing because it allows me to express my emotions. I especially enjoy Georgian folk music, but I also like pop and rock songs. Singing these different styles makes me feel happy and relaxed.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Focus on directly answering the question about learning to sing. Use clear sentences and linking words to explain your experience and challenges.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was a child, I attended guitar classes, which helped me understand music better. Although I faced some difficulties and doubts at first, I eventually overcame them and improved my skills.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my classmates at school during special events or celebrations. I have already participated in a school concert, which was a great experience and motivated me to perform more often.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Express your opinion clearly and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words to organize your ideas coherently.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it inspires and motivates them. Listening to music can improve mood and make people feel blessed, especially during difficult times.

× I admire to listen Georgian folk especially of course some pop, rock and other songs, other different kinds of this songs as well.

✓ I admire listening to Georgian folk, especially of course some pop, rock and other songs, other different kinds of these songs as well.

The verb 'admire' should not be followed by 'to listen'. Instead, the gerund form 'listening to' is correct here. Also, 'this songs' should be 'these songs' to match plural form.

× I went to guitar class.

✓ I went to guitar classes.

The noun 'class' in this context is usually plural when referring to multiple sessions. Using plural 'classes' is more natural.

× I had some hesitation was thought that I couldn't deal with the tasks, could not now learn the records, but thanks God it's everything went.

✓ I had some hesitation and thought that I couldn't deal with the tasks, could not learn the records then, but thank God everything went well.

The original sentence lacks proper conjunctions and has awkward phrasing. Adding 'and' connects ideas properly. 'Could not now learn' is incorrect; 'could not learn then' is better. 'Thanks God' should be 'thank God'. 'It's everything went' is incorrect; 'everything went well' is correct.

× I want to sing for my class at school, we often had evenings or celebrating some special dates and I would like to sing there and once I had experience when I participated in such a concert, then I was playing there and because I.

✓ I want to sing for my class at school. We often have evenings or celebrate some special dates, and I would like to sing there. Once, I had experience when I participated in such a concert; I was playing there as well.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper punctuation. 'Had evenings or celebrating' should be 'have evenings or celebrate'. The sentence is fragmented and incomplete at the end; it needs to be restructured for clarity.

× Inspiration can bring inspiration, can motivate them and improve their mood.

✓ Music can bring inspiration, can motivate people and improve their mood.

The sentence repeats 'inspiration' unnecessarily. Also, 'them' is vague; specifying 'people' clarifies the meaning.