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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like singing? Why?

Thí sinh

Yes, I love singing, It helps me to release my stress and make me feel more energetic. Also, even though I'm not a professional singer, I really like to sing my favorite songs in my spare time. It's just a fun and uplifting activity for me.

Giám khảo

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Thí sinh

No, I've never take any professional singing lessons, but I used to study music so I think I've learned to have a more professional I've have learned to develop a good year that makes singing could be easier for me. I wouldn't call myself a professional singer, but I.

Giám khảo

Who do you want to sing for?

Thí sinh

I would like to sing for my friends. Me and my friends, we always go to karaoke together and pick up our favorite songs and singing together. They don't judge me even if I mess up the lyrics but so it's just a happy moment together.

Giám khảo

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Thí sinh

Definitely. I often seen when I was cooking, cleaning or showering. Singing songs can really make those a boring moment to be more fun and it can take the those ordinary situation to be more cheerful. This kind of happiness is simple but real.

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Part 1

Do you like singing? Why?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容相关,但存在语法错误和表达不够简洁的问题。建议注意句子结构,避免重复表达,并使用更准确的时态和连接词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relieve stress and makes me feel more energetic. Although I'm not a professional singer, I enjoy singing my favorite songs in my spare time as it is a fun and uplifting activity.

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰,句子结构混乱。建议简化句子,使用正确的时态和语法,明确表达自己的意思。

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken professional singing lessons, but I used to study music. This has helped me develop a better understanding of singing techniques, although I am not a professional singer.

Who do you want to sing for?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容相关且表达了情感,但存在语法错误和句子不连贯的问题。建议使用正确的主谓一致和连接词,使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I like to sing for my friends. We often go to karaoke together, choose our favorite songs, and sing as a group. They never judge me if I forget the lyrics, so it is always a happy moment for us.

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但语法和用词错误较多,句子结构不够清晰。建议注意时态一致,使用恰当的词汇和连接词,使表达更准确。

Ví dụ: Definitely. I often sing while cooking, cleaning, or showering. Singing can make these boring moments more enjoyable and turn ordinary situations into cheerful ones. This simple happiness feels genuine.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I love singing, It helps me to release my stress and make me feel more energetic.

Yes, I love singing. It helps me to release my stress and makes me feel more energetic.

原句中逗号连接了两个独立句,应该用句号分开。此外,主语It后动词应与主语一致,make应改为makes。

Past tense issue

× No, I've never take any professional singing lessons, but I used to study music so I think I've learned to have a more professional I've have learned to develop a good year that makes singing could be easier for me.

No, I've never taken any professional singing lessons, but I used to study music so I think I've learned to be more professional and have developed good skills that make singing easier for me.

动词take在完成时态中应使用过去分词taken。原句结构混乱,重复且不完整,需调整句子结构使其通顺。

Incorrect conjunction use

× Me and my friends, we always go to karaoke together and pick up our favorite songs and singing together.

My friends and I always go to karaoke together, pick our favorite songs, and sing together.

主语顺序应为My friends and I,且动词形式应保持一致,pick和sing应为原形。

Incorrect conjunction use

× They don't judge me even if I mess up the lyrics but so it's just a happy moment together.

They don't judge me even if I mess up the lyrics, so it's just a happy moment together.

连词but和so不能连用,应选择其中一个,且句子中缺少逗号。

Past tense issue

× I often seen when I was cooking, cleaning or showering.

I often sing when I am cooking, cleaning, or showering.

动词seen用法错误,应为sing。时态应与描述的习惯动作相符,使用一般现在时。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Singing songs can really make those a boring moment to be more fun and it can take the those ordinary situation to be more cheerful.

Singing songs can really make boring moments more fun and can make ordinary situations more cheerful.

定冠词和量词使用错误,those与a连用不当,且单复数不匹配,应去掉多余的冠词并调整名词复数形式。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BoringTedious
FunMerriment; Ridicule; Enjoyable; Playful; Tease
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
SimpleStraightforward; Clear; Plain; Candid
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