Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Yes, sure, I am so into the saying 'cause seeing has helped me relieve my stress and this kind of hobby is very interesting and meaningful, so singing is a great habit for me.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
Actually I I never learned how to sing better 'cause I think singing is just one of the hobbies for me. I don't pay much time and attention to it. So actually I never did it.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
As for me, I think the teachers is the person that I want to sing for. The reason is that the teachers are very helpful and selfless. So I think I want to see some meaningful and interesting songs for them for.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Absolutely yes, singing is a great habit for people 'cause it can bring happiness and and excitement to people. Especially when we are stressful, seeing is a great way to help us relieve our stress.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法和词汇错误,如将'singing'误说成'saying'和'seeing',影响了表达的自然性和准确性。建议注意发音和用词的准确性,避免重复和冗余,同时保持句子简洁。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress. It is an interesting and meaningful hobby that brings me happiness.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误,表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地回答问题,并用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Actually, I have never taken singing lessons because I consider it just a hobby. Therefore, I haven't spent much time improving my skills.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,如'the teachers is'应为'the teachers are','see'应为'sing'。建议注意主谓一致和词汇准确性,同时使句子更简洁自然。
Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my teachers because they are very helpful and selfless. Singing meaningful songs for them would be a way to show my appreciation.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇和错误用词,如'seeing'应为'singing',影响表达的清晰度。建议使用恰当的词汇,避免重复,并用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Absolutely, singing can bring happiness and excitement to people. Especially when we feel stressed, singing is a great way to relax and relieve tension.
× I am so into the saying 'cause seeing has helped me relieve my stress and this kind of hobby is very interesting and meaningful, so singing is a great habit for me.
✓ I am so into singing 'cause singing has helped me relieve my stress and this kind of hobby is very interesting and meaningful, so singing is a great habit for me.
这里'saying'和'seeing'是拼写错误,应该是'singing'。动词的现在分词形式用来表示正在进行的动作,错误的拼写导致句子意思不明确。建议注意单词拼写,确保动词形式正确。
× Actually I I never learned how to sing better 'cause I think singing is just one of the hobbies for me.
✓ Actually I never learned how to sing better 'cause I think singing is just one of the hobbies for me.
句中重复了'I',属于句子结构错误,影响表达清晰。建议避免重复词语,保持句子简洁。
× So actually I never did it.
✓ So actually I have never done it.
这里用过去时'did'不太合适,因为表达的是从过去到现在的经历,应该用现在完成时'have never done'。建议根据时间状语选择正确的时态。
× As for me, I think the teachers is the person that I want to sing for.
✓ As for me, I think the teacher is the person that I want to sing for.
主语'teachers'是复数,谓语动词用单数'is',主谓不一致。根据句意,应该用单数'teacher'匹配单数谓语。建议注意主谓一致。
× The reason is that the teachers are very helpful and selfless.
✓ The reason is that the teachers are very helpful and selfless.
此句无错误,主语'teachers'为复数,谓语动词'are'也为复数,主谓一致。无需修改。
× So I think I want to see some meaningful and interesting songs for them for.
✓ So I think I want to sing some meaningful and interesting songs for them.
句中'see'用错,应该是'sing',因为上下文谈论的是唱歌。句尾多余的'for'应删除。建议根据语境选择正确动词,避免多余词语。
× Absolutely yes, singing is a great habit for people 'cause it can bring happiness and and excitement to people.
✓ Absolutely yes, singing is a great habit for people 'cause it can bring happiness and excitement to people.
句中重复了'and',属于词语重复错误。建议注意避免重复词语,保持表达简洁。
× Especially when we are stressful, seeing is a great way to help us relieve our stress.
✓ Especially when we are stressed, singing is a great way to help us relieve our stress.
'stressful'形容词用错,应该用' stressed'表示感到压力的状态;'seeing'拼写错误,应为'singing'。建议区分形容词和过去分词的用法,注意单词拼写。