Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, sometimes I would go to KTV with my friends and we will have a good time here. And in my daily lives when I am in a good mood, I would singing.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
No, I haven't had a formal singing lesson before, but I enjoy listening to the music and by listening I would learn how to sing. For example, I like to imitate my favorite singers.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I usually just think for myself because sometimes I feel embarrassed to sing in front of my friends. I worry that they may judge me and I might sing badly, so I feel more comfortable to singing alone.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely whenever I'm in a bad mood I would think for myself and it make me relax and also I like to listening to music and to learn new songs.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答时语法有误,如“would singing”应为“would sing”,且表达略显重复和不够简洁。建议注意动词形式和句子简洁性,避免冗余。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing. Sometimes I go to KTV with my friends, and we have a great time. Also, when I'm in a good mood, I like to sing at home.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答结构较好,但“by listening I would learn”表达不够自然,建议使用更地道的表达方式,并适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I learn by listening to music. For example, I often imitate my favorite singers to improve my skills.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“to singing”应为“to sing”,且表达略显重复。建议注意动词不定式的正确使用,并尝试丰富表达。
Ví dụ: I usually sing for myself because I feel embarrassed singing in front of friends. I'm afraid they might judge me if I sing badly, so I prefer singing alone.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如“it make me relax”应为“it makes me relax”,“like to listening”应为“like listening”。句子结构不够清晰,建议加强语法准确性和句子连贯性。
Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Whenever I'm in a bad mood, I sing to myself because it helps me relax. I also enjoy listening to music and learning new songs.
× And in my daily lives when I am in a good mood, I would singing.
✓ And in my daily life when I am in a good mood, I would sing.
这里的动词“singing”用法错误,应该用动词原形“sing”来表示习惯性动作。此外,“daily lives”应改为单数形式“daily life”,因为这里指的是个人的日常生活。
× I worry that they may judge me and I might sing badly, so I feel more comfortable to singing alone.
✓ I worry that they may judge me and I might sing badly, so I feel more comfortable singing alone.
动词“singing”前不需要介词“to”,因为“feel comfortable”后直接跟动名词形式。去掉“to”后,表达更自然正确。
× Yes, definitely whenever I'm in a bad mood I would think for myself and it make me relax and also I like to listening to music and to learn new songs.
✓ Yes, definitely whenever I'm in a bad mood I would think for myself and it makes me relax and also I like listening to music and to learn new songs.
“make”应改为第三人称单数形式“makes”,因为主语是“it”。“like to listening”中“to”与动名词“listening”搭配错误,应改为“like listening”。
× Yes, definitely whenever I'm in a bad mood I would think for myself and it make me relax and also I like to listening to music and to learn new songs.
✓ Yes, definitely whenever I'm in a bad mood I would think for myself and it makes me relax and also I like listening to music and to learn new songs.
主语“it”是第三人称单数,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“makes”,这是主谓一致的基本语法规则。