Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但句子结构不够自然，且有语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议注意句子完整性，避免语法错误，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and feel comfortable. Moreover, some songs can convey the singer's emotions and attitude effectively.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，句子不够连贯。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和冠词的使用，并且补充具体细节使回答更丰富。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have taken an online singing class. It was very helpful because it taught me many techniques to improve my singing skills and boosted my confidence.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了想为朋友唱歌的想法，但句子结构不够自然，有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my closest friends because it is meaningful. They can point out my mistakes and encourage me to improve my singing skills.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇错误和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的词汇，注意主谓一致，并且用具体例子说明唱歌如何带来快乐。

Ví dụ: Definitely yes, singing is a powerful way to express emotions. Through singing, we can share our feelings and bring happiness to others.

× Definitely yes, I'm interested in singing because it helps me relax and feels comfortable.

✓ Definitely yes, I'm interested in singing because it helps me relax and feel comfortable.

这里的主语是 'it'，后面跟两个动词 'helps me relax' 和 'feel comfortable'，这两个动词是并列关系，应该保持一致，使用动词原形 'feel'，而不是第三人称单数 'feels'。

× Beside some songs can impress their singers attitude and emotions which is.

✓ Besides, some songs can impress their singers' attitude and emotions.

'Beside' 是介词，意思是 '在旁边'，这里应使用副词 'Besides' 表示 '此外'。另外，'singers attitude' 应该是所有格，表示 '歌手的态度'，应写成 'singers' attitude'。句子末尾的 'which is' 不完整，应删除。

× Yes, I bought online class to learn how to sing.

✓ Yes, I bought an online class to learn how to sing.

这里 'bought' 是过去式，符合语境，但 'online class' 前缺少冠词 'an'，因为 'class' 是可数名词，单数形式需要冠词。

× I found this class is useful because it taught me many techniques to improve my singing skill and it helps me have a good.

✓ I found this class is useful because it taught me many techniques to improve my singing skills and it helps me have a good time.

'singing skill' 应为复数 'singing skills'，因为通常指多种技能。句子末尾 'have a good' 不完整，应该补充名词，如 'have a good time'。

× Sing for them is useful and meaningful.

✓ Singing for them is useful and meaningful.

动名词 'Singing' 作为主语更合适，直接用动词原形 'Sing' 作为主语不符合英语语法。

× They can show my mistake and they can also encourage me to improve my singing skill.

✓ They can point out my mistakes and they can also encourage me to improve my singing skills.

'show my mistake' 不自然，通常用 'point out mistakes' 表示指出错误。'mistake' 应为复数 'mistakes'，'singing skill' 应为复数 'singing skills'。

× Definitely yes, seeing is a useful tool to impress their emotions.

✓ Definitely yes, singing is a useful tool to express emotions.

'seeing' 应为 'singing'，因为上下文讨论的是唱歌。'impress their emotions' 不合适，应该用 'express emotions' 表达传达情感。

× Through the scene we can show my attitude and motivation to makes people happiness.

✓ Through the scene, we can show our attitude and motivation to make people happy.

'my' 与主语 'we' 不一致，应改为 'our'。'makes' 应为动词原形 'make'，因为前面有 'to'。'people happiness' 应改为形容词 'happy'。