Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and has some grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating the word 'singing' too often and correct the phrase 'whenever I am in South' which seems unclear. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me reduce stress and improve my mood whenever I feel sad. Singing is a great way to express my emotions and relax after a long day.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Instead of 'learned about how to sing', say 'learned how to sing'. Also, use linking words like 'but' or 'however' to connect ideas. Try to be more specific about how singing along with music helps you.

Ví dụ: No, I have never learned how to sing professionally. However, I often sing along with songs on my mobile phone, which helps me improve my singing skills gradually.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but slightly repetitive with phrases like 'for myself' and 'positive vibes'. Try to vary your vocabulary and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, explain briefly why singing for yourself is important.

Ví dụ: I prefer to sing for myself rather than for others because it helps me feel positive and boosts my confidence. Singing alone allows me to relax and enjoy the moment.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Avoid repeating the same idea multiple times. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to connect your points logically. Also, try to provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and feel positive. Therefore, singing often helps improve mood and create joyful moments.

× Yes, I like singing and I am very passionate about singing and singing help me to reduce my stress level or just to enhance my mood whenever I am in South whenever I am sad.

✓ Yes, I like singing and I am very passionate about singing and singing helps me to reduce my stress level or just to enhance my mood whenever I am sad.

The verb 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' because the subject 'singing' is singular. Also, the phrase 'whenever I am in South' is unclear and likely incorrect, so it is removed for clarity.

× No, I have never learned about how to sing.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing.

The phrase 'learned about how to sing' is incorrect; 'learned how to sing' is the correct expression. The verb tense 'have never learned' is correct as it refers to experience up to now.

× I usually sing whenever I am in mood and I prefer to sing music from mobile phones and this help me to have some knowledge about the singing.

✓ I usually sing whenever I am in the mood and I prefer to sing along with music from mobile phones and this helps me to gain some knowledge about singing.

The phrase 'in mood' should be 'in the mood' (article usage). 'Sing music' is incorrect; 'sing along with music' is appropriate. 'This help' should be 'this helps' to agree with singular subject. 'Have some knowledge about the singing' is better expressed as 'gain some knowledge about singing'.

× I want to sing for myself rather than someone else, and I usually prefer to sing alone for myself just to feel positive and have some positive vibes as well.

✓ I want to sing for myself rather than for someone else, and I usually prefer to sing alone just to feel positive and have some positive vibes as well.

The phrase 'sing for myself rather than someone else' needs 'for' before 'someone else' for parallel structure. Also, 'sing alone for myself' is redundant; 'sing alone' suffices.

× Yes, I think so that singing can bring happiness to the people because singing is the best way to show our emotions and have some positive vibes as well. So this is the reason that people can bring more happiness to the people. Singing can bring more happiness to the people.

✓ Yes, I think that singing can bring happiness to people because it is the best way to show our emotions and have positive vibes. This is why singing can bring more happiness to people.

The phrase 'I think so that' is incorrect; 'I think that' is correct. 'The people' is unnecessarily definite; 'people' is better. The sentence 'people can bring more happiness to the people' is confusing and redundant; it is corrected to clarify that singing brings happiness to people.