SingingPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like singing? Why?

Thí sinh

Yes I do I uh, I am a person that umm I listen music uh, every day uh, I like it music so much and uh the music make me feel more better umm when I was a child I sing every day my favorite songs and I like so much to sing.

Giám khảo

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Thí sinh

Yes I have when I was a student we have a subject music and when I have music I everyday sing in the class and my classmate. In.

Giám khảo

Who do you want to sing for?

Thí sinh

I want to sing for my husband. I learn, I know to I know all the text of the music or all the songs. I prefer to to sing sing all the time and I don't have emotion to sign up.

Giám khảo

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Thí sinh

Yes I do, for me it's the best way that make me more better and more enthusiastic. When I think I just when just feel happy when I when I am bad, when I feel bad I just listen to music.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you like singing? Why?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence. For example, explain why singing makes you feel better and mention a specific favorite song or memory.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel happy. For example, when I was a child, I used to sing my favorite songs every day, which made me feel joyful and confident.

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Provide a clear and complete answer with proper sentence structure. Begin with a direct response, then add specific details about your singing lessons or experiences. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was a student, I took music classes where I practiced singing every day with my classmates.

Who do you want to sing for?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Focus on giving a clear and coherent answer. Start with a direct response, then explain why you want to sing for your husband. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my husband because it makes him happy. I have learned all the lyrics of my favorite songs, and I enjoy singing for him whenever I can.

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Answer clearly and organize your thoughts logically. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons or examples. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences to make your answer more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to people. For me, singing improves my mood and makes me feel enthusiastic. When I feel sad, listening to music helps me feel better.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the present participle form

× I listen music uh, every day uh, I like it music so much and uh the music make me feel more better

I listen to music every day, I like music so much and the music makes me feel better

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'music'. 'More better' is incorrect; 'better' alone is the correct comparative form.

Past tense issue

× when I was a child I sing every day my favorite songs

when I was a child I sang my favorite songs every day

The action happened in the past, so the verb should be in the past tense 'sang' instead of 'sing'. The adverb 'every day' is better placed at the end for clarity.

Subject-verb agreement errors

× we have a subject music and when I have music I everyday sing in the class and my classmate. In.

we had a music subject and when I had music, I sang every day in class with my classmates

The past tense 'had' is needed to match 'when I was a student'. 'Sing' should be 'sang' for past tense. 'Classmate' should be plural 'classmates' to match the context. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I want to sing for my husband. I learn, I know to I know all the text of the music or all the songs.

I want to sing for my husband. I have learned and I know all the lyrics of the songs

The phrase 'I learn, I know to I know' is confusing and incorrect. 'Have learned' is the correct present perfect tense to indicate past learning with present relevance. 'Text of the music' should be 'lyrics of the songs' for correct terminology.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I prefer to to sing sing all the time and I don't have emotion to sign up.

I prefer to sing all the time and I don't have the emotion to sign up

Repeated words 'to to' and 'sing sing' are errors. 'Sign up' is likely a mishearing or misuse; context suggests 'sing up' or 'sign up' is incorrect. The phrase 'I don't have emotion to sign up' is unclear; assuming it means lacking motivation or feeling to register or participate, 'the emotion' is needed for specificity.

Verb in the present participle form

× it's the best way that make me more better and more enthusiastic.

it's the best way that makes me better and more enthusiastic

'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'way'. 'More better' is incorrect; 'better' alone is correct.

Sentence structure errors

× When I think I just when just feel happy when I when I am bad, when I feel bad I just listen to music.

When I feel bad, I just listen to music and it makes me happy

The original sentence is repetitive and confusing. Simplifying the structure improves clarity and correctness.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BadSubstandard; Harmful; Unpleasant; Inauspicious; Severe
BestFinest; To the highest standard
BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
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