Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
To be honest with you, I used to like thing but after countless hours of singing lessons in my primary school I gradually lost interest in things so now I really think and only listen to music sometimes.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
Actually, yes. I took regular singing lessons in my primary school about twice a week. Despite being not that professional, our music teacher still taught us a lot of techniques about how to sing properly and we even had a choir about it.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
As I don't really enjoy singing, I only sing for people who are special to me. For example, at the last day of my class teacher at school, my classmates and I sang a song for her as a whole class which made it a memorable experience.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
In some way, yes, definitely, because music can evoke people's emotions. For example, if you are listening to a happy song, you genuinely feel happy and joyful. But sometimes sad music also makes you feel really depressed.
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Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且内容较为冗长。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和模糊的词汇。
Ví dụ: I used to enjoy singing when I was younger, but after many singing lessons in primary school, I gradually lost interest. Now, I prefer just listening to music occasionally.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答结构较好，但部分表达不够自然，如“Despite being not that professional”应改为更地道的表达。建议使用更自然的连接词和表达方式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I took singing lessons twice a week in primary school. Although we weren't professionals, our music teacher taught us many proper singing techniques, and we even formed a choir.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子，使用恰当的连接词，使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I usually sing only for people who are special to me. For instance, on our class teacher's last day, my classmates and I sang a song together, which was a memorable experience.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富且有例子支持，但开头表达略显重复。建议使用更自然的连接词，避免重复词汇，使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, singing can definitely bring happiness because music evokes emotions. For example, listening to an upbeat song can make you feel joyful, while sad music might evoke feelings of melancholy.
Ngữ pháp
× I used to like thing but after countless hours of singing lessons in my primary school I gradually lost interest in things so now I really think and only listen to music sometimes.
✓ I used to like things but after countless hours of singing lessons in my primary school I gradually lost interest in things so now I really think and only listen to music sometimes.
这里的"thing"应该用复数形式"things"，因为表示泛指的多个事物。单数和复数的错误会影响句子的准确表达。
× Despite being not that professional, our music teacher still taught us a lot of techniques about how to sing properly and we even had a choir about it.
✓ Despite not being that professional, our music teacher still taught us a lot of techniques on how to sing properly and we even had a choir for it.
"Despite being not that professional"的表达不自然，应该改为"Despite not being that professional"。"techniques about how to sing"应改为"techniques on how to sing"，"had a choir about it"应改为"had a choir for it"，这些都是介词使用错误。
× At the last day of my class teacher at school, my classmates and I sang a song for her as a whole class which made it a memorable experience.
✓ On the last day of my class teacher at school, my classmates and I sang a song for her as a whole class which made it a memorable experience.
时间表达"the last day"前应使用介词"on"，而不是"at"。这是介词使用错误。
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