Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like singing. I think music have its power to relieve our stress and keep a positive attitude towards life. I usually go to karaoke with my friends when we have free time.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
I haven't learned how to sing formally, but I often sing casually at home when I am alone. I really enjoy singing because it help us relieve stress. For example, when I feel upset, sing a song can make me feel better.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I would like to sing for my family members and friends. I think singing is a good way to express our emotion and especially during special occasions. Singing together also strengthen our emotional connections.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Of course, I believe singing can bring us happiness because it allows us to express our emotions. For example, when I feel upset. Singing a favorite song makes me feel more relaxed and cheerful.
Đánh giá
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Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法上有些小错误，如“music have”应为“music has”，同时可以更自然地表达。建议注意主谓一致，避免语法错误，并且回答可以更简洁自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because music has the power to relieve stress and help me maintain a positive attitude. I often go to karaoke with my friends during our free time.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“help us”应为“helps me”，“sing a song”应为“singing a song”。建议注意动词形式和主谓一致，同时用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: I haven't had formal singing lessons, but I often sing casually at home when I'm alone. I enjoy it because it helps me relieve stress. For example, when I feel upset, singing a song makes me feel better.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如“express our emotion”应为“express our emotions”，“strengthen”应为“strengthens”。建议注意复数形式和动词单复数一致，同时可以用更丰富的词汇表达。
Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my family and friends because singing is a great way to express emotions, especially during special occasions. Singing together also strengthens our emotional bonds.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但句子“when I feel upset.”不完整，建议避免句子碎片，保持句子完整和连贯。
Ví dụ: Of course, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows us to express our emotions. For example, when I feel upset, singing my favorite song helps me feel more relaxed and cheerful.
Ngữ pháp
× I think music have its power to relieve our stress and keep a positive attitude towards life.
✓ I think music has its power to relieve our stress and keep a positive attitude towards life.
这里的主语是单数名词'music'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'have'应改为'has'，以保持主谓一致。
× I really enjoy singing because it help us relieve stress.
✓ I really enjoy singing because it helps us relieve stress.
主语'it'是第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'help'应改为'helps'，以保持主谓一致。
× For example, when I feel upset, sing a song can make me feel better.
✓ For example, when I feel upset, singing a song can make me feel better.
此处'sing a song'作为主语不符合句子结构，应使用动名词形式'singing'来作主语，使句子结构完整。
× Singing together also strengthen our emotional connections.
✓ Singing together also strengthens our emotional connections.
主语'Singing together'是第三人称单数，谓语动词'strengthen'应改为第三人称单数形式'strengthens'，以保持主谓一致。
× For example, when I feel upset. Singing a favorite song makes me feel more relaxed and cheerful.
✓ For example, when I feel upset, singing a favorite song makes me feel more relaxed and cheerful.
原句中'For example, when I feel upset.'是一个不完整的句子，应与后句合并，用逗号连接，形成完整的复合句。
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