Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then provide a concise reason. Avoid repeating the same idea twice. Also, correct grammar such as 'How I don't like' to 'I don't like' and 'between a crowded' to 'in front of a crowd.'

Ví dụ: I don't like singing very much because I feel shy when I have to sing in front of a crowd.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar. Start with a direct response, then add supporting details. Avoid filler words like 'so so.' Also, improve sentence clarity and grammar, for example, 'I used to in the in the primary school' should be 'I learned singing in primary school.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing in primary school because it was part of the curriculum. Although I can sing a little, I am not very good at it.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by starting with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question. Also, avoid filler words like 'Umm' and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my girlfriend because I feel confident singing in front of her, and I love her very much.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows good ideas but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. For example, 'Singing aloud people is express their emotions' is incorrect. Try to use linking words and clearer expressions. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'or choice.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions, especially when singing together in a group.

× How I don't like singing very much.

✓ I don't like singing very much.

The sentence incorrectly starts with 'How' which is unnecessary and causes confusion. The correct sentence should start directly with the subject 'I'. Removing 'How' corrects the sentence structure.

× I am shy when I stand up between a crowded, so I don't like singing very much.

✓ I am shy when I stand up among a crowd, so I don't like singing very much.

The preposition 'between' is used for two items, but 'a crowded' is incorrect and should be 'a crowd'. The correct preposition for more than two is 'among'. Also, 'a crowded' is incorrect; it should be 'a crowd'.

× Well, I used to in the in the primary school I had to pass the singing class so so I can sing a little bit but not great.

✓ Well, I used to in primary school. I had to pass the singing class, so I can sing a little bit but not great.

The phrase 'in the in the primary school' is redundant and awkward. Removing the extra 'the' and splitting into two sentences improves clarity. Also, 'used to in primary school' is incomplete; it should be 'used to sing in primary school' or similar, but since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes from the list, minimal correction is applied.

× Absolutely. That's my girlfriend, Umm.

✓ Absolutely. She is my girlfriend, umm.

The sentence 'That's my girlfriend' is acceptable in spoken English, but 'That's' refers to 'that is' which is less precise than 'She is' when referring to a person. Changing to 'She is my girlfriend' clarifies the pronoun usage.

× I feel confident when I'm singing in front of her because I love her very much.

✓ I feel confident when I'm singing in front of her because I love her very much.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Yes, of course. I believe that singing can definitely bring happiness to people. Singing aloud people is express their emotions and especially when done with others in a group or choice.

✓ Yes, of course. I believe that singing can definitely bring happiness to people. Singing aloud allows people to express their emotions, especially when done with others in a group or choir.

The phrase 'Singing aloud people is express their emotions' is ungrammatical. It should be 'Singing aloud allows people to express their emotions'. Also, 'choice' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'choir'. Correcting these improves sentence structure and clarity.