Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，句子结构有些混乱。建议简化句子结构，使用更地道的表达方式，并避免冗余。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially when I want to express my feelings to my loved ones, like my parents.

Gợi ý: 时态使用不准确，表达不够流畅。建议注意时态一致性，使用更自然的表达，并简化句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a child, I attended a singing club where a professional teacher taught me vocal techniques like breath control and pitch accuracy.

Gợi ý: 回答中断断续续，句子不连贯，词汇使用不当。建议连贯表达观点，避免断句，使用恰当词汇。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my parents because it is a wonderful way to show my love and appreciation, and it also makes them happy.

Gợi ý: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，逻辑不连贯。建议理清思路，使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can express our emotions, especially positive ones like happiness and kindness, which can bring joy to others.

× Yes, I'd like singing, especially for some situation where I need to express my emotions to someone I really love, like my parents.

✓ Yes, I'd like to sing, especially in some situations where I need to express my emotions to someone I really love, like my parents.

动词“like”后面应接不定式“to sing”而不是动名词“singing”。此外，“some situation”应为复数“some situations”，因为这里指的是多种情况。建议使用不定式表达喜欢做某事。

× Yes, when I was a little kid, I have attended a singing club where I followed a professional mentor who told me various vocal techniques such as breast control and pitch accuracy.

✓ Yes, when I was a little kid, I attended a singing club where I followed a professional mentor who taught me various vocal techniques such as breath control and pitch accuracy.

句子描述过去发生的事情，应使用一般过去时“attended”，而不是现在完成时“have attended”。另外，“told me”应改为“taught me”，因为“teach”更符合教授技能的语境。单词“breast control”应为“breath control”，是拼写错误。

× I want to sing for my parents. Because I think. Singing. For them, it's a great way to show my deep generosity and love to them. And I also think it is a way to make them happy and pleasant.

✓ I want to sing for my parents because I think singing for them is a great way to show my deep gratitude and love. I also think it is a way to make them happy and feel pleasant.

原句中断句不当，导致句子结构混乱，应合并为完整句子。单词“generosity”用错，正确应为“gratitude”（感激）。“make them happy and pleasant”中“pleasant”用法不当，应改为“feel pleasant”或“feel happy”。

× Yes. I think singing is a great way to show our positive or negative emotions to people. But I considered that the positive ones could be, more. Welcome, like happiness and generosity.

✓ Yes, I think singing is a great way to show our positive or negative emotions to people. But I consider that the positive ones are more welcome, like happiness and gratitude.

“considered”时态错误，应为现在时“consider”。“more welcome”前不应有逗号。单词“generosity”用错，应为“gratitude”。句子表达应更连贯。