Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Absolutely not because I can't think so well. I think it is like it's more like noise. So I don't usually take karaoke with my friends or I just listen there sing song because I sing sing their.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
No, because I'm not interested in that. I like playing some instruments such as piano. I think this is my real interest. So I had never learned, see.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
Maybe my mom because she really likes singing and she often want to want to teach me how to sing. So if I could see a song I want to sing for her to make hey to make her happy.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Of course, seeing is a very beautiful thing. I really want to listen to someone's concert such as Taylor Swift. I think it will may make my day and I will feel happy for that.
Đánh giá
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Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然，表达不清晰且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和不连贯的句子。
Ví dụ: No, I don't like singing because I find it difficult to sing well. I usually prefer listening to others sing rather than singing myself.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答结构基本正确，但表达不够流畅，语法有误。建议使用更准确的时态和连贯的句子。
Ví dụ: No, I have never learned how to sing because I am more interested in playing instruments like the piano, which I enjoy much more.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简洁表达愿望，并使用正确的语法和连接词。
Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my mom because she loves singing and has tried to teach me. Singing for her would make her happy.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议使用准确的词汇和语法，表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Of course, singing is a beautiful art. I enjoy attending concerts, like those of Taylor Swift, because they can brighten my day and make me feel happy.
Ngữ pháp
× I don't usually take karaoke with my friends or I just listen there sing song because I sing sing their.
✓ I don't usually do karaoke with my friends or I just listen to them sing songs because I sing there.
动词短语中，'take karaoke' 应改为 'do karaoke'，表示参加卡拉OK活动；'listen there sing song' 应改为 'listen to them sing songs'，动词 listen 后应接介词 to，且 'sing song' 应为复数形式 'sing songs'。
× So I had never learned, see.
✓ So I have never learned, see.
此处表达的是过去到现在的经历，应该使用现在完成时 'have never learned'，而不是过去完成时 'had never learned'。
× she often want to want to teach me how to sing.
✓ she often wants to teach me how to sing.
动词 'want' 应与第三人称单数主语 'she' 一致，变为 'wants'；且重复使用 'want to' 是错误的，应去掉多余的部分。
× So if I could see a song I want to sing for her to make hey to make her happy.
✓ So if I could sing a song, I want to sing for her to make her happy.
'see a song' 是错误表达，应为 'sing a song'；'make hey' 应为 'make her'，且句子中缺少逗号分隔条件状语。
× I really want to listen to someone's concert such as Taylor Swift.
✓ I really want to listen to someone's concert, such as Taylor Swift's.
'someone's concert such as Taylor Swift' 应明确所有格，改为 'Taylor Swift's'，表示泰勒·斯威夫特的演唱会。
× I think it will may make my day and I will feel happy for that.
✓ I think it may make my day and I will feel happy because of that.
'will may' 是错误的双重情态动词，应只用一个 'may'；'feel happy for that' 应改为 'feel happy because of that'，表达原因。
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