Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了害羞和缺乏自信的情绪，但语言表达不够自然，存在语法错误，如“facility of my voice”应为“quality of my voice”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议简化表达，直接说明自己不常唱歌的原因，并注意主谓一致。

Ví dụ: I don't sing often because I'm shy and I don't think my voice sounds very good.

Gợi ý: 回答中有较多语气词“uh”，影响流畅度。动词时态不一致，如“listened”与“watch”应统一。建议减少语气词，注意时态一致，并用更自然的表达方式说明学习唱歌的方法。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. When I was alone, I often listened to music and watched videos to learn how to sing like my favorite singers, such as Jay Chou.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“go to the TV”不合适，且句子冗长且重复。建议简化句子，明确表达想为朋友唱歌的意愿，并避免重复。

Ví dụ: As I said, I rarely sing in front of others, but if I practice enough, I would like to sing for my friends at a karaoke bar and enjoy their compliments.

Gợi ý: 回答中语气词过多，影响流畅性。语法错误如“is a specific method to broke”应为“is a way to break”。建议减少语气词，使用正确语法，并用更具体的例子说明唱歌带来的快乐。

Ví dụ: Of course. Singing and music can help people relieve stress, learn about different cultures, and share happiness with others.

× I don't have a good facility of my voice and my soul

✓ I don't have good facilities for my voice and my soul

facility 是可数名词，表示设施或能力，复数形式为 facilities。这里应使用复数形式，且介词应为 for 而非 of。

× I seldom shows my singing before anyone

✓ I seldom show my singing before anyone

主语是第一人称单数 I，动词 show 不加 s。第三人称单数才加 s。

× I uh, often listened to uh, music and watch videos to learn how to sing

✓ I uh, often listened to uh, music and watched videos to learn how to sing

句中时态应保持一致，既然用了过去时 listened，watch 也应改为过去时 watched。

× I tried to imitate singers like Jay Chou

✓ I tried to imitate singers like Jay Chou

此句无错误，保持原句。

× I seldom shows my voice before others

✓ I seldom show my voice before others

主语是第一人称单数 I，动词 show 不加 s。

× maybe I would like to go to the KTV, go to the TV with my friends and and show my skills to them

✓ maybe I would like to go to the KTV, go on TV with my friends and show my skills to them

go on TV 是固定搭配，表示上电视。go to the TV 是错误用法。

× I enjoy their admirable sights

✓ I enjoy their admiring looks

sights 指风景，admirable 意为值得赞赏的，搭配不当。应使用 admiring looks 表示他们赞赏的目光。

× singing and music is a specific method to broke the burden

✓ singing and music are specific methods to break the burden

主语是复数 singing and music，谓语动词应为复数 are。动词不定式应为 break，不是 broke。

× singing and music is a specific method to broke the burden

✓ singing and music are specific methods to break the burden

broke 是动词 break 的过去式，此处应使用不定式 break。

× broaden everyone's horizons about different cultures

✓ broaden everyone's horizons of different cultures

broaden horizons 通常搭配介词 of，表示对不同文化的视野。

× can share their happiness with everyone

✓ can share their happiness with everyone

此句无错误，保持原句。