Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较长且有些重复，建议简洁表达，避免冗余，同时注意句子结构的完整性和连贯性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. I also enjoy performing on stage, which makes it fun for me.

Gợi ý: 回答内容清晰，但句子结构稍显简单，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't taken professional singing classes. I taught myself because singing is just a hobby that I enjoy.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且有情感，但句子较长且有些重复，建议分句表达并使用连接词提高流畅度。

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would sing for my sister. She has faced many difficulties recently, so I would choose the song "All Too Well" to comfort her.

Gợi ý: 回答未完成且表达不够连贯，建议完整表达观点，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness not only to listeners but also to the singer because songs have a magical power to spread positive emotions.

× Yes, I really like to sing because I think I have a good voice and I like to perform on the stage so and also singing makes me feel relaxed and express my emotions and it is fun.

✓ Yes, I really like singing because I think I have a good voice and I like to perform on the stage, and also singing makes me feel relaxed, helps me express my emotions, and it is fun.

动词后接动名词形式时，like后面用动名词更自然；句子中缺少逗号，导致句子结构混乱，应适当断句；表达“express my emotions”前应加动词helps，使句子完整。

× No, I haven't learned how to sing. I didn't go to the professional singing class before.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing. I haven't gone to a professional singing class before.

句中使用了过去时didn't go，但前面用了现在完成时haven't learned，时态不一致，应统一用现在完成时表示过去到现在的经历；此外，professional singing class前缺少冠词a。

× I learned singing by myself as I think singing for me is just interest for me.

✓ I learned singing by myself as I think singing is just an interest for me.

短语“interest for me”不正确，正确表达是“an interest for me”或“an interest of mine”，这里用“an interest for me”更合适；此外，句子中“singing for me”多余，应去掉。

× If I have the opportunity to sing for a person, it would definitely be my sister because I want to sing a song called All Too Well to Her because she has been through lots of difficulties to these days.

✓ If I have the opportunity to sing for a person, it would definitely be my sister because I want to sing a song called All Too Well to her because she has been through lots of difficulties up to these days.

“to Her”中的“Her”不应大写，且“to”用法不当，正确表达是“sing a song called All Too Well to her”；“to these days”应改为“up to these days”表示直到现在。

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people and not only the listeners but the one who sing the song because I think the songs have a kind of magic power to spread the good emotions together and.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people, not only to the listeners but also to the ones who sing the songs, because I think songs have a kind of magic power to spread good emotions together.

句子结构混乱，缺少逗号和连词，导致表达不清；“the one who sing”应为“the ones who sing”保持主谓一致；“spread the good emotions together and”结尾不完整，应去掉“and”并调整句子结构。