Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当，例如将'Sydney'误用为'singing'，以及'correct seeing the songs'表达不清晰。建议你使用正确的词汇表达你的观点，并且简洁明了地说明原因。

Ví dụ: I don't like singing because I think my voice is not very good, and I usually can't sing the songs correctly.

Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不准确，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用简单过去时描述过去的经历，并且表达自信心不足的原因时更流畅。

Ví dụ: No, I learned how to sing when I was a child, but I found that I can't sing songs correctly because I'm not confident about my singing voice.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇错误，如'don't want to see for myself'表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，说明你不愿意为谁唱歌，并解释原因。

Ví dụ: I don't want to sing for anyone because I am not confident about my weak voice and I feel shy singing in public.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不相关且表达混乱，'helpful for their contract visa'与问题无关。建议围绕唱歌带来的快乐展开，使用相关词汇和逻辑连接。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it creates a relaxing atmosphere and helps people feel joyful when they listen to others sing.

× I don't like Sydney because I think my voice is not very good and usually I can't correct seeing the songs correctly.

✓ I don't like singing because I think my voice is not very good and usually I can't sing the songs correctly.

句中将'singing'误写为'Sydney'，且'correct seeing'用法错误，应为'sing'。'singing'是动名词，表示唱歌的动作。

× No, actually, I had learned how to sing when I was a kid, but I find out that I Can't Sing the songs correctly because I'm not confident about my singing voice.

✓ No, actually, I learned how to sing when I was a kid, but I find out that I can't sing the songs correctly because I'm not confident about my singing voice.

过去完成时'had learned'在此处不合适，简单过去时'learned'更符合语境。'Can't Sing'中的大写字母错误，应为'can't sing'。

× I just don't want to see for myself because I am not confident about my thin voice and I am a little bit shy to sing songs in public.

✓ I just don't want to sing for myself because I am not confident about my thin voice and I am a little bit shy to sing songs in public.

'see for myself'用法错误，应为'sing for myself'，因为上下文谈论的是唱歌。

× Yes, singing can make a relaxing environment and then people who are listening others singing can helpful for their contract visa.

✓ Yes, singing can create a relaxing environment, and then people who are listening to others singing can benefit their mental health.

'make a relaxing environment'更自然的表达是'create a relaxing environment'。'listening others singing'缺少介词'to'。'can helpful'应为'can be helpful'或更自然的表达。'contract visa'语义不明，推测为误用，改为'benefit their mental health'更合理。