Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise, avoid repeating words like 'mind refresh' and 'want to'. Also, directly answer the question first, then add specific reasons with linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and lift my mood when I'm feeling bored or down. For example, I often listen to Arijit Singh, a famous Indian singer, whose wonderful voice always refreshes my mind and inspires me to sing along.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain briefly with clear and correct sentences. Avoid repeating words and incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I have never formally learned how to sing because I haven't had time, and singing is not taught in my school. However, I enjoy singing by myself occasionally for fun.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Make sure to directly answer the question, use correct tense, and provide clear supporting details. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear references.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I wanted to sing for my family and friends. I often sang my favorite song, 'Tum Hi Ho' by Arijit Singh, because it deeply moves me and feels like heaven to my soul.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Use clearer expressions and linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'vibe of singing song' and 'more comfortable to listen'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because songs have a positive vibe that refreshes and entertains people. For instance, many singers from India and Nepal have unique voices that listeners find very pleasant and comforting.

× I like singing because it makes my mind refresh when I was bored or depressed.

✓ I like singing because it refreshes my mind when I am bored or depressed.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'was' with present tense context. Since the statement is general, present tense should be used. Also, 'makes my mind refresh' is awkward; 'refreshes my mind' is the correct verb form.

× I want to listen the music of Arijit Singh who is the famous singer of India.

✓ I want to listen to the music of Arijit Singh, who is a famous singer from India.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Also, 'the famous singer' should be 'a famous singer' as it is not a unique title, and 'of India' is better expressed as 'from India'.

× He makes my mind mind refreshable with his.

✓ He refreshes my mind with his voice.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Mind mind refreshable' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses a clear subject-verb-object structure and specifies 'voice' for clarity.

× His voice is so wonderful so I want to.

✓ His voice is so wonderful that I want to listen to it.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'that' introduces a result clause, and 'listen to it' completes the thought.

× No, I never ever learned how to sing because I have no time to to learn about the singing, because in my class there is no subject of particular how to sing or how to dance.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I have no time to learn about singing, and in my class there is no subject specifically about how to sing or dance.

The present perfect 'have never learned' is appropriate for life experiences. 'To to' is a typo and should be 'to'. 'About the singing' is better as 'about singing'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Sometimes I usually prefer myself to sing, but that.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to sing by myself, but that's all.

'Prefer myself to sing' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'prefer to sing by myself'. The sentence is completed for clarity.

× Just when I was a kid I want to sing for I usually sing on the song of Arizona sing called Tum Hi ho.

✓ When I was a kid, I wanted to sing. I usually sing the song by Arijit Singh called 'Tum Hi Ho'.

The past tense 'wanted' matches 'when I was a kid'. 'Sing on the song' is incorrect; it should be 'sing the song'. The singer's name is 'Arijit Singh', corrected from 'Arizona sing'.

× It is my favorite song which I listen the most.

✓ It is my favorite song that I listen to the most.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. 'Which' is replaced by 'that' for defining relative clause.

× This song vibes my soul just like heaven.

✓ This song touches my soul like heaven.

'Vibes my soul' is informal and ungrammatical. 'Touches my soul' is a more appropriate expression. 'Just like heaven' is simplified to 'like heaven' for clarity.

× Yes, of course. I think singing can bring happiness to people because the vibe of singing song can make peoples refreshable and enjoyable.

✓ Yes, of course. I think singing can bring happiness to people because the vibe of a singing song can make people feel refreshed and enjoy themselves.

'Peoples' is incorrect plural; 'people' is correct. 'Refreshable' is not used correctly; 'feel refreshed' is appropriate. 'Enjoyable' should be 'enjoy themselves' to express the effect on people.

× There are many sing singers in India and Nepal which the voice of their own are more comfortable to listen so I believe in that.

✓ There are many singers in India and Nepal whose voices are comfortable to listen to, so I believe in that.

'Sing singers' is redundant; 'singers' is correct. 'Which the voice of their own are' is incorrect; 'whose voices are' is the correct relative pronoun and verb agreement. 'Comfortable to listen' should be 'comfortable to listen to'.