Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Yes, I really enjoy singing. It's a fascinating way to express emotions and relieve stress. I usually prefer to singing with friends during parties. I think it's a good way to connect with similar interested people and is a fun way.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
Yes of course during my students life the schools always taking lessons for how to sing, but I always lose some confidence so I don't prefer to sing in front of others I always feel.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
Actually I prefer to sing for my family because they always has been my biggest supporters and when I singing for my family I have to be relaxed but if I.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, in my opinion, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it is a good way to express emotions and relieve their suggest and the singing camp express their unhappy.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因,但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。例如,“prefer to singing”应为“prefer singing”或“prefer to sing”。建议注意动词形式和句子结构,使表达更流畅自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions and relieve stress. I usually prefer singing with friends at parties, as it is a fun way to connect with people who share similar interests.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,句子结构不完整,表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子,注意时态和主谓一致,明确表达自己的经历和感受。
Ví dụ: Yes, of course. During my student life, schools always offered singing lessons. However, I often lost confidence, so I prefer not to sing in front of others.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,如“has been”应为“have been”,“when I singing”应为“when I sing”。建议完整表达观点,注意语法和句子完整性。
Ví dụ: Actually, I prefer to sing for my family because they have always been my biggest supporters. When I sing for them, I feel relaxed and comfortable.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇使用错误,如“relieve their suggest”应为“relieve their stress”,句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议使用准确词汇,表达完整的观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and relieve their stress. Singing can help people feel happier and more relaxed.
× I usually prefer to singing with friends during parties.
✓ I usually prefer singing with friends during parties.
动词prefer后面应直接接动名词形式,不能用不定式to + 动词原形。这里应使用动名词singing。
× Yes of course during my students life the schools always taking lessons for how to sing, but I always lose some confidence so I don't prefer to sing in front of others I always feel.
✓ Yes, of course, during my student life, the schools always took lessons on how to sing, but I always lost some confidence so I don't prefer to sing in front of others; I always feel nervous.
描述过去的事情时,动词应使用过去时态。这里的taking应改为took,lose应改为lost。
× Actually I prefer to sing for my family because they always has been my biggest supporters and when I singing for my family I have to be relaxed but if I.
✓ Actually, I prefer to sing for my family because they have always been my biggest supporters, and when I sing for my family, I have to be relaxed.
主语they是复数,谓语动词应使用have而非has。动词sing前应使用原形,不能用现在分词singing。
× Actually I prefer to sing for my family because they always has been my biggest supporters and when I singing for my family I have to be relaxed but if I.
✓ Actually, I prefer to sing for my family because they have always been my biggest supporters, and when I sing for my family, I have to be relaxed.
动词prefer后面接不定式to sing是正确的,但后面when引导的从句中,动词应用原形sing而非现在分词singing。
× Yes, in my opinion, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it is a good way to express emotions and relieve their suggest and the singing camp express their unhappy.
✓ Yes, in my opinion, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it is a good way to express emotions and relieve their stress, and the singing camp expresses their unhappiness.
单词suggest用错,应为stress(压力)。camp后面缺少动词表达,且unhappy应改为名词形式unhappiness。
× Yes, in my opinion, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it is a good way to express emotions and relieve their suggest and the singing camp express their unhappy.
✓ Yes, in my opinion, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it is a good way to express emotions and relieve their stress, and the singing camp expresses their unhappiness.
主语the singing camp是单数,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式expresses。