Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有些重复，且语法不够准确。建议简洁明了地表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because my favorite singer inspires me, and singing his songs helps me learn more about him.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，清楚说明通过手机学习唱歌的情况。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I use a singing app on my phone to practice.

Gợi ý: 回答时态混乱，表达不连贯。建议直接回答想为谁唱歌，并用正确的时态描述具体场合。

Ví dụ: I wanted to sing for my friend on her birthday last year to celebrate with her.

Gợi ý: 回答中多次出现拼写错误和语法问题，且表达不够清晰。建议使用正确单词并简洁表达唱歌带来快乐的原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, singing can bring happiness because it is enjoyable and helps people relax.

× Of course I like singing because my idol, who I like him, is a singer and I can sing his song to learn about him.

✓ Of course I like singing because my idol, whom I like, is a singer and I can sing his songs to learn about him.

句中“who I like him”中，关系代词后不应再使用人称代词“him”，应改为“whom I like”。此外，“song”应为复数形式“songs”，因为通常指多首歌曲。

× No I haven't, but I learn to sing on my phone. I update the application to single.

✓ No, I haven't, but I learned to sing on my phone. I updated the application to sing.

回答中描述过去的动作，应使用过去时态，故“learn”改为“learned”，“update”改为“updated”。另外，“to single”应为“to sing”，单词拼写错误。

× Last year is my friend's birthday. During the time I want to sing for my friends because it is it was her birthday.

✓ Last year was my friend's birthday. At that time, I wanted to sing for my friend because it was her birthday.

描述过去事件，动词应使用过去时态，“is”改为“was”，“want”改为“wanted”。“During the time”表达不自然，改为“At that time”。“friends”应为单数“friend”，与前文一致。

× Last year is my friend's birthday. During the time I want to sing for my friends because it is it was her birthday.

✓ Last year was my friend's birthday. At that time, I wanted to sing for my friend because it was her birthday.

“friends”应改为“friend”，因为指的是特定的一个朋友。

× Of course, seeing can bring happiness to people because seeing is actually is a happy thing and people will relax in the scene.

✓ Of course, singing can bring happiness to people because singing is actually a happy thing and people will relax when singing.

句中“seeing”应为“singing”，拼写错误。最后一句“people will relax in the scene”表达不准确，改为“people will relax when singing”更符合语境。