Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using simple and correct sentence structures. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons or examples. Also, avoid confusing words or phrases like 'proposed for the relaxation and in German'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel happy. Singing is a great way to enjoy myself, especially during festivals when everyone joins in. It brings joy to my mind and makes me feel peaceful.

Gợi ý: Focus on giving a direct and clear answer first, then add supporting details. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Use correct grammar and sentence structure. For example, explain briefly your experience with singing lessons and your future plans.

Ví dụ: I have tried to learn singing, but not very seriously because it was not part of my school curriculum and my grandparents could not afford extra lessons. However, I am still interested and plan to join a singing class soon.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Provide specific reasons why you want to sing for your family and mention cultural aspects clearly.

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my family because they have always supported me during difficult times. Singing in front of them makes me feel comfortable and relaxed. In Nepal, it is a tradition to sing with family during festivals, which makes it even more special.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding awkward phrases like 'romantic and ideal terms to speak about people'. Use specific examples and linking words to explain your opinion. Also, avoid repetition and filler words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people express their feelings. For example, when someone feels lonely at home, listening to music or singing can make them feel better and less alone.

× Just I like singing because it is one of the most proposed for the relaxation and in German.

✓ I just like singing because it is one of the most proposed activities for relaxation in Germany.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing words, making it unclear. 'Just I like singing' should be 'I just like singing' to follow normal English word order. Also, 'proposed for the relaxation and in German' is unclear and likely meant to say 'proposed activities for relaxation in Germany'. Correcting word order and adding missing words improves clarity.

× In other way the singing can be can be the one of the best friend for the each and every people's, to make the mind itself a pleasure and to create some of the happiness even in the times of during the festival.

✓ In another way, singing can be one of the best friends for each and every person, to make the mind itself a pleasure and to create some happiness even during festivals.

The phrase 'the one of the best friend' is incorrect; it should be 'one of the best friends' to match plural 'friends'. Also, 'the each and every people's' is incorrect; it should be 'each and every person' because 'people' is plural and 'each and every' requires singular noun. 'Some of the happiness' should be 'some happiness' for natural expression. 'In the times of during the festival' is redundant; 'during festivals' is sufficient.

× Uh, talking about the singing, uh, umm, nevertheless, I have tried, but not so, not so enough.

✓ Uh, talking about singing, uh, umm, nevertheless, I have tried, but not enough.

The phrase 'not so, not so enough' is redundant and ungrammatical. 'Not enough' is the correct expression to indicate insufficient effort. The present perfect 'have tried' is appropriate here.

× Uh, what? Because it was never the part of our school curriculum and my mother's parents, uh, did not afford me for the extra lessons.

✓ Uh, what? Because it was never part of our school curriculum and my grandparents did not afford me extra lessons.

'The part' should be 'part' without 'the' because 'part' is used in a general sense. 'My mother's parents' is better expressed as 'my grandparents'. 'Did not afford me for the extra lessons' is incorrect; 'afford me extra lessons' is correct without 'for'.

× Uh, but I am still learning the singing and I will try to uh, sing. I try to join the class after.

✓ Uh, but I am still learning to sing and I will try to sing. I will try to join the class later.

'Learning the singing' is incorrect; 'learning to sing' is correct. 'I try to join the class after' should be 'I will try to join the class later' to express future intention properly.

× I would like to sing for my family because they are the one who, who are they? They are me.

✓ I would like to sing for my family because they are the ones who support me.

'They are the one' is incorrect; it should be 'they are the ones' to agree in number. 'Who are they? They are me.' is unclear and ungrammatical; it is corrected to a meaningful sentence.

× They are me, uh, to support in each and every difficult situation and even, even, uh, I feel so much comfort, comfortable and relaxed, uh, to sing in front of our family.

✓ They support me in every difficult situation and I feel very comfortable and relaxed singing in front of my family.

'They are me' is incorrect pronoun usage. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correct pronoun use. 'Comfort' is a noun; 'comfortable' is the adjective needed here. 'So much comfort, comfortable' is redundant; 'very comfortable' is correct.

× And uh, and in the context of Nepal, it is the in during the time of festival, it is the culture of the singing with the family and even they.

✓ And in the context of Nepal, during festival times, it is a culture to sing with family.

'It is the in during the time of festival' is incorrect preposition use and word order. Correct preposition is 'during festival times'. 'It is the culture of the singing with the family' is awkward; 'it is a culture to sing with family' is clearer and grammatically correct. 'And even they' is incomplete and removed.

× Yes, I do believe singing can bring the happiness to the people because singing is itself one of the most romantic and ideal terms to speak about people.

✓ Yes, I do believe singing can bring happiness to people because singing is one of the most romantic and ideal ways to express feelings about people.

'The happiness' is incorrect; 'happiness' is an uncountable noun and does not need 'the' here. 'Terms to speak about people' is awkward; 'ways to express feelings about people' is clearer and more natural.

× Even they feel lonely at homes when they are with some something like like some of the musical items and they are listening to the music like in the TV, watch phones or in any others musical instrument.

✓ Even if they feel lonely at home, they listen to music using devices like TV, phones, or other musical instruments.

'Even they feel lonely at homes when they are with some something like like some of the musical items' is ungrammatical and unclear. 'At homes' should be 'at home'. 'Watch phones' is incorrect; 'phones' is sufficient. 'Any others musical instrument' should be 'other musical instruments'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correct pronoun and preposition use.