Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cavabınızda təkrarlar və qarışıqlıq var. Daha təbii və səlis ifadə üçün cümlələri qısaldın və mövzu cümləsi ilə başlayın. Məsələn, hobbinizdən və niyə sevdiyinizdən qısa və aydın danışın.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love singing because it has been my hobby since childhood. However, I prefer to sing alone rather than in front of others, especially in warm and comfortable places.

Gợi ý: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və qarışıqlıq var. Cavabınızı daha aydın və qısa edin, mövzu cümləsi ilə başlayın və əlavə məlumatları əlaqələndirici sözlərlə təqdim edin.

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. However, as a child, I watched YouTube tutorials by professional singers and tried to imitate their techniques.

Gợi ý: Cümlələrinizdə söz seçimi və ifadələrdə qarışıqlıq var. Daha dəqiq və təbii ifadələr istifadə edin və fikirlərinizi əlaqələndirici sözlərlə birləşdirin.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I loved singing for my parents because they always listened to my songs, whether they were simple or silly. Their support made me happy.

Gợi ý: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və təkrarlar var. Cavabınızı daha aydın və məntiqli etmək üçün mövzu cümləsi ilə başlayın və səbəb-nəticə əlaqəsini göstərən ifadələrdən istifadə edin.

Ví dụ: Definitely, singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and unwind. Many enjoy singing as a way to express their emotions and feel joyful.

× It was a hobby, such a hobby since I was a child, since when I was a child.

✓ It has been a hobby, such a hobby since I was a child.

The sentence refers to a hobby that started in the past and continues to the present, so the present perfect tense 'has been' is appropriate instead of the simple past 'was'.

× I prefer to sing, not around people, like I don't like cold places.

✓ I prefer to sing not around people; I don't like cold places.

The phrase 'not around people' is better connected without a comma, and 'like' is unnecessary here. Also, the sentence is clearer when split or connected properly.

× I'm actually no, I've never learned how to sing, but when I was a child I was opening YouTube videos from professional singers, videos like How can I sing?

✓ Actually, no, I've never learned how to sing, but when I was a child I used to watch YouTube videos from professional singers, videos like 'How can I sing?'.

The phrase 'I was opening' is incorrect for habitual past action; 'used to watch' or 'watched' is correct. Also, 'I'm actually no' is incorrect; 'Actually, no' is better.

× But actually no, I have never learned housing.

✓ But actually no, I have never learned singing.

The word 'housing' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'singing'. This is a vocabulary error rather than grammar, but it affects sentence correctness.

× I loved to sing to my parents because they were always listening to my musings, musics.

✓ I loved to sing to my parents because they were always listening to my music.

The word 'musics' is incorrect as 'music' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. 'Musings' means thoughts, which is not appropriate here.

× Doesn't matter if I was like singing normal things or like absurd things, they were always glad to hear my songs.

✓ It didn't matter if I was singing normal things or absurd things; they were always glad to hear my songs.

The phrase 'Doesn't matter if' is incorrect; it should be 'It didn't matter if' to match past tense and proper sentence structure.

× Definitely a singing can bring joy to people because some people love singing songs and that's why when they are singing they feel relaxed and like unwind.

✓ Definitely, singing can bring joy to people because some people love singing songs, and that's why when they sing, they feel relaxed and unwind.

The article 'a' before 'singing' is incorrect because 'singing' is an uncountable noun here. Also, 'like unwind' should be 'unwind' without 'like'.

× That's why singing differently brings happiness.

✓ That's why singing brings happiness.

The word 'differently' is unnecessary and confusing here; removing it clarifies the sentence.